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plsss🤔s up date yaar...👍🏼
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thank u verymuch guys for supportinggg...

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chapter:26

Rohan:{takes a bite} wow'''..yummy'..out of this world..{taani right hand was on that table'.rohan keeps hand on taani's hand' reyam sees this'& rey gets angry & thinks'}

Rey:ye samajhta kya hain apne aapko'aaye jab se taani isi ke saath busy hain' mujhe to bhul hi gayi'iska kuch karna padta' hey krishnaji picnic jane ke baad aisa kuch kijiye jisse main aur taani time spent kar sake saath mein & thn rohan says}

Rohan: taani tune to meri life banadi..kitne dino ke baad dhabhe mein bhet ke hum kha rahe hain' bas aise time par sirf tu & mein rehte the to I would be in air'

Taani:haa rohan tumne bhi aake meri ye picnic trip awesome bana di'mujhe ye trip hamesha yaad rahegi yar'.

Rohan:chl abh tu bhi kha ya mein khilao'uss din ki tarah'.

Taani:kis din ki tarah'.

Rohan:yaad nahi taani'uss din jab tu bahut dukhi thi'hum dono sirf ham dono restaurant gaye the.. yaad hain tune khane se mana kiya tha'.maine tujhe bade pyaar se khilaya tha na 'yaad aaya idiot?Aur uske baad tune usi restaurant ke disco main tere juice main kisine kuch mila diya tha aur tujhe chad gayi thi,,..aur tu kya nachi thi'I must say'

Taani:rohan plzzz'[all were looking at taani so she says}guys khahiye na'.{all starts eating}

Swayam:khana acha hain'.

Taani:hain na bhai maine kaha tha na aur jothpur mein to aur acha milta hain'kitne din se jothpur nahi gaye'isiliye bahut yaad aa rahi hain'.par mujhe pata hain jabh main wapas jaungi bahut khushi hogi sabko' aur pata hain aapko{thn rohan cuts him & say}

Rohan:control taani'main hu na' bus main bhet ne ke baad sab mujhe batana'abhi khale taani sikhaaawat'

Taani:kha rahi hu rohan raichaaand''''''''{thn aftr sometime}

Rohan:idiot..mujhe ye sabji nahi pasand tujhe pata hain na'.

Taani:haa main khati hu na'.

Rohan :ye teri plate mein baki hain aur mera to khatam ho gaya'

Taani:haa to meri plate main khale'{all eating & seein them'taani n rohan shares their plate' }

Rohan:oh meri taani zara naan to manga'

Taani:haa'praji ek naand'{naand comes]

Rohan:{takes that'} bas abh kuch nahi..

Taani:kisiko aur kuch chahiye?

All:nahi'

Taani:praji do naan..

Rohan:kis liye?

Taani:hamare liye..

Rohan:nahi nahi bas'

Taani:k main kha lungi..{naand comes 'as it comes rohan grabs one'& eats & as he goes to grab one more rey grabs it'.& finally all complets their lunch'.now 3 glasses lassi comes & taahan{rohan & taani} special item also comes'all r eagerly waiting to see tht wat is in it'

Swayam:ye kya hain taani..

Taani:batati hu bhai'rohan ready..

Rohan:yes taani..{& she opens that plate & all comes to see tht the plate contains so many green chillies'.simmi says}

Simmi:green spicy chillies'

Rohan:yes babes'green spicy chillies''.

Rimmi:kya tum ye khane wale ho'

Rohan:yes babes'would u like to try..

Rimmi:nahi nahi'

Rohan: k fine'.chal taani'start kare'

Taani:nahi nahi rohan'tum khao'main nahi khaungi'

Rohan:ye kya baat hui'par kyun?

Taani:jothpur main alag baat thi'abh aadat nahi hain'dekh ke hi meri aakho mein paani aa raha hain'khaungi to'

Rohan:kya yaar tu bhi Mumbai jake mumbains walo ke jaisi ban gayi'

Rey:matlabh kya hain tumhara/'.

Rohan:I mean to say that'tum log I mean Mumbai ke logo mein kuch karne ka zasba'.chah aur himmat nahi rehti..tum log hain na fattu hote ho..bas bolne ke Mumbai wale bolte ho.. that's it'

Rey:aisa kuch nahi'jo kaam koi aur nahi kar saktana wo bhi Mumbai wale kar sakte hain'

Rohan:to tum yeh mirchiyaan kha sakte ho'

Rey:ofcourse..

Rohan:then ham competition lagate hain 1 minute kaun kitni mirchi khata hain..

Rey:fine'taani aur ek plate mangao..

Taani:rey par aap nahi kha payenge'ise to aadat hain..

Rey:taani'maine kaha na..

Swayam:nahi rey tumhe mirchi se'..{cuts him & rey says}

Rey:swayam maine keh diya na bas keh diya

Vicky:bt rey tu nahi kar payega taani kehrahi hai na use adat hai bt tu..

Kriya:yaa rey plz mat kijiye'

Rey;ek minute guys mumbai wale kya kya kar sakte hain aaj to batana hi padega {n says to rohan} lets start rohan'.{waiter brings one more plate of chillies & then they start n sharon's sees the time..

Rey & rohan both goes on eating'.last ten seconds were left & bth of them have 10 chillies still'bth of them quickly eats those & time gets over'rey's plte gets completed bt rohan's plate still had 1 more chilli'.then rey takes a deep breathe & bth of start asking for water.}

Sharon:rey tum jeet to gaye..par tumhe pata hain na tumhe mirchi se allergy hain..

Taani:{loudly shocks & shouts'} allergy..{& goes on giving him water'{whole team gets shocked seeing this..} kam hua?

Rey:{nods his head saying no'thn taani goes & brings a plateful of sweets & start making him eat by her hand'.n shouts at him..}

Taani:zarurat kya thi aapko khane ki' hame pata hain aap bahut mahan hain aur sab kuch kar sakte hain'par apni mahanta kahi aur dikhana'kam hua?

Rey:haa'

Taani:kisne kaha ta aapko zyada aage jake khane ke liye'maine aap se pehle hi kaha than auss idiot ko to kaam dhanda nahi hain bas use hamesha mazaak hi sujata hain'aap to chup chap bhet sakte the na'aapko to ..{till thn Sharon comes keeps hand on her shoulder & says }

Sharon:{smiles} ho gaya'bas'{all laughs & rey also smiles & she blushes}

Rohan:meri maa..kuch bach gaya hoga to mujhe bhi khila de

Taani:haa..{& gives off the plate to him'he some what thinks bad tht for rey she has made him to eat for me simply giving the plate'thn all completes & swayam goes to driver & asks}

Swayam:ho gaya bus ka kaam'

Driver:nahi aur thodi der lagegi

Swayam:k fine'.{thn he comes to team n says}

Swayam:guys still time for the bus to be repaired..

Sharon:so thn lets sit here only'.

All:yaa sure'{all sits taani sits & beside her rohan goes & sit'

Vicky:are borr ho raha hain yaar.

Nilesh:yes guys lets have some fun'

Rey:guys'wat is this,'.ham picnic pe ja rahe hain '. We shall enjoy' kuch gaana bajana karte hain'. Lets play antakshari'

Swayam:aaj tujhe kya hua hai kabhi mood aacha rehta hai kabhi gussa hota hai mujhe laga tu inhe daat ne wala hai bt tu to unke saath hi suru hogaya hai.

Vicky:swayam jane dena jo acha enjoy karne jaraha ha use tu ched kyu raha hai chalo guys nice idea hai rey ka so..lets play girls vs boys'..waise bhi boys hi jeetenge' coz girls cant sing'

Vishaka:wat do u mean? Come on lets play'phir dekhte hain kaun jeet ta hain'.

Neha:yes'yes'girls one team ,boys one team'

Bharath:thik hain'are swayam idhar side aaja..iss side par boys'rohan tub hi aaja'

Rohan:sure guys

Taani:jaja dekhlena hum jeetenge hai na girls'

All girls:hey hey,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Rohan:wo to hum dekhhilenge ki kaun jeetega n kaun haarega,,,,cholo guys hum hi suru karte hai ye aise bhi jeetene wale phele hote hai {then rey starts singing song} {takes a turn n winks at taani n sings}


next part is continued guys...

Edited by rajkumaripari - 12 years ago
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guys next part is continued here...first it was 1 part but coz of forum rules i m unable to post it in 1 part...so 2 parts...

chapter:27😉😛😃



Taani:jaja dekhlena hum jeetenge hai na girls'

All girls:hey hey,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Rohan:wo to hum dekhhilenge ki kaun jeetega n kaun haarega,,,,cholo guys hum hi suru karte hai ye aise bhi jeetene wale phele hote hai {then rey starts singing song} {takes a turn n winks at taani n sings}

Rey:--- mere dil main aaj'. kya hain '{comes to taani n move around her n sings}

Tu kahe.,., to mein bata du'

{then come back n bymistake hit kriya n everyone things he is singing for kriya then rey again look at taani & sings}

Na chahu sona chandi,

Na chahu heera moti,

Ye mere kis kaam ke''[swayam n rohan join him n then he sings}

Na mangu bangla gaadi'

Na mangu ghoda gaadi'.

Ye to hain bas naam ke''..{showing hand towards taani}

Deti hain dil de,,, badle mein dil ke''

Deti hain dil de,,, badle mein dil ke '{then all neha n vishika pushes kriya infront of rey n kriya blushes n sings}

Kria:Aehe he'.he'he'aheheherey'..saiba

Pyaar main sauda nahi''{goes behind taani & sings]

Aehe he'.he'he'ahehehe'..saiba

Pyaar main sauda nahi''[then swayam says into Sharon ears]

Swayam:kitne ache lag rahe hain na'

Sharon:nahi..i mean haa'par hamari tarah nahi'.

Swayam:tumhe pata hain Sharon main tumse zyada kria ko like karta hoon'

Sharon:kya..

Swayam:haa'.

Sharon:matlabh u dnt like me..

Swayam:na..nt much 'u r k..bt she is awesome' agar rey bich main nahi aata to I would be with kria only,'..{rey n kriya complete n girls turn comes n thinks what to sing then suddenly Sharon sees swayam n simles n sings']

Sharon:to swayam

Jhut bole !!!!!!!!!!{in front of swayam}

Are jhut bole kawaa kaate'kale kawe se dariyo

Mein mayake chali jaungi,,tum dekhte rahiyo{goes straight to swayam & says}

Mein mayake chali jaungi,,tum dekhte rahiyo

Jhut bole !!!!!!!!!!{thn simmi & rimmi join her'}

Are jhut bole kawaa kaate'kale kawe se dariyo

Mein mayake chali jaungi,,tum dekhte rahiyo

Mein mayake chali jaungi,,tum dekhte rahiyo

{then swayam without waiting starts singing by catching sharon's hand'.}

Lejayenge,lejayenge dil wale dulhania le jayenge'.{thn takes Sharon in his arms & sings}

Ahahah Lejayenge,lejayenge dil wale dulhania le jayenge'.

All girls:- Lejayenge,lejayenge dil wale dulhania le jayenge'.

[puts Sharon down n says]

Swayam:-are rahe jayenge rahe jayenge ghar wale dekhte reh jayenge'..

all girls:-- rahe jayenge rahe jayenge ghar wale dekhte reh jayenge'..

all:- Lejayenge,lejayenge dil wale dulhania le jayenge'.{seeing sharon smmi n rinni gets upset n simmi says}

simmi:-- to Sharon coming to her'..

simmi:ye galiya ye chaubara'.yaha aana na dobaara

rimmi: Ye galiya ye chaubara'.yaha aana na dobaara

rinni n simmi:{having tears rool down there cheeks n says}

Abh ham to bahe pardesi..ke tera yaha koi nahi' ke tera yaha koi nahi'

Taani:Leja rangbir yaade,

Hasne rone ki buniyaade'.

Neha ,kriya n vishaka:Abh ham to bahe pardesi..ke tera yaha koi nahi' ke tera yaha koi nahi'

{all girls go to Sharon & become emotional n all join in a hug n Sharon also hug them then our hero to cheer up them all he says}

Rohan:in between all girls to cheer up them'.

Bachna aeee haseeno,,lo main aa gaya'.

Bachna aeee haseeno,,lo main aa gaya'.{rolls simmi at on side & neha on the othr side..}

Husana ka aashiq,,, husana ka dushman{goes to rimmi , Sharon , vishaka}

Apni adaa hain yaaro se juda'hheee,,,hooo

{goes to taani & says}

Bachna aeee haseeno,,lo main aa gaya'.

{n winks at her n to tease him she sings}

Taani:to rohan'..

Aap yaha aaye kis liye???

Rohan:to taani'.

Aapne bulaya iss liye'.

Taani:to rohan'..

Aaye hain to kaam bhi bataiye

Rohan:to taani'

Na na na..Pehle jara aap muskuraiye'.

Taani:to rohan'..

Aap yaha aaye kis liye???[then Vicky gets excited n start singing']

Vicky : comes in centre

Main nikla oh gadi leke'..[everybody clapps n dances bangada n again Vicky says..]

Main nikla oh gadi leke'..

Oh raaste par oh sadak mein{goes to neha & says}

Ek mod aaya ' main uthe dil chod aaya{n takes a turn n}

Nilesh:comes to centre beside Vicky..{then both start singing}

Ek mod aaya ' main uthe dil chod aaya {thn goes to simmi}

Bharat:Rab jane kab guzara amritsar

Amar:Kab jane lahore'.aaya' main uthe dil chod aaya

Then all boys:Ek mod aaya ' main uthe dil chod aaya[all were laughing then suddenly vishka sees kriyawho was seeing rey n vishaka comes to kriya n sings]

Vishaka:to kria'.

Chup chup khade ho zarur koi baat hain{piches kriya hand n says again}

Pehli mulaqat hain ye pehli mulaqat hain{then neha also comes n sings ..}

Pehli mulaqat hain ye pehli mulaqat hain

Chup chup khade ho zarur koi baat hain{n vishaka n neha pushes kriya towards rey n rey moves back n kriya then balance her self n stands there}

{Neha n vishaka bit there heads n sings}Pehli mulaqat hain ye pehli mulaqat hain[then they both goes n neha pushes rey n vishaka pushes kriya towards each other from both sides}

Pehli mulaqat hain ye pehli mulaqat hain{rey gets irritated n gets out from there n goes from there bt as he was going taani sings}

Taani: Raja ki aayegi barat,,,rangili hogi raat

Magan mein nachungi' ohoho'Magan mein nachungi{rolls & by mistake goes to rohan..}

Raja ki aayegi barat,,,rangili hogi raat

Magan mein nachungi' ohoho'.Magan mein nachungi[seeing rey sings softly n turns other side}

Raja ki aayegi barat,,,

Rey:{stands infront of taani looks confused n to cheer his taani he sings}.

Aaj kal tere mere pyaar ke charche har zabaan par{taani gets shock n then kriya comes to rey n says}

Kria:to rey

Acha

Rey:[continue with kriya bt sees taani]

Sabko maloom hain aur sabko khabar ho gayi'

Kria:to rey

To kya'

Aaj kal tere mere pyaar ke charche har zabaan par'

Kria:to rey

Jaa jaa'..

Rey:Sabko maloom hain aur sabko khabar ho gayi[everybody claps n then neha comes in center n sings]

Neha:[from center to goes to Vicky]

Ohoho'Pardesia''pardesia ye sach hain piya sab kehte hain

maine tujh ko dil de diya.

{Neha n Vicky starts dancing}Pardesia''pardesia ye sach hain piya sab kehte hain

maine tujh ko dil de diya.{keepings hand on his shoulder..}

Main kehti hu tune mera dil le liya'{hugs him n sings}

Main kehti hu tune mera dil le liya{then rimmi n vishaka starts singing}

Rimmi & vishaka:to amar & bharath'

Ude jab jab jhulfe teri'

Ude jab jab jhulfe teri'{in the centre standing beside their patners}

Kawariyo ka dil machle

Kawariyo ka dil machle jindh miriye..{ Bharath &Amar comes to them sn sings}

Bharath &Amar:to rimmi &vishaka

Oh jab aise chikne chehre

Oh jab aise chikne chehre{catching their hand..}

To kaise na nazar phisle'

to kaise na nazar phisle jindh miriye

{everybody were enjoying n laughing n taani n rohan were together dancing by seeing this rey gets jelous n sings by coming near taani..}

rey:{chutki bajate hua taani ke samne kehte hai}

oh Dil walo dil mera sun ne ko bekarar hain'.

Kaho naa pyaar hain '{showing finger to taani}

Kaho na pyaar hain'

Kaho naa pyaar hain '{stands beside taani & start doing the signature step with kriya seeing taani..}

Kaho na pyaar hain'

Chaahat hain hum tum hain{stands in frnt of taani..}

Chaahat se sansaar hain'.{then all with there respective patners do the signature step n rohan comes n rohan n kriya do the step together n rey constantly looking at taani}

Kaho naa pyaar hain'

Kaho na pyaar hain'

Kaho naa pyaar hain'

Kaho na pyaar hain[turns back n then again towards taani bt till then taani moves from there n then again music starts n taani sings moving towards all team members first to swaron make then dance then one by one to all make them dance}

Taani:Ajeeb daasta hain ye'.

Kaha shuru kaha khatam

Ye manjeele hain konsi{goes frnt of rohan }

Na wo samajh sake na ham'.

{goes to rey & says showing kriya}

Mubaarke tumhe ke tum kisi ke noor ho gaye'{thn goes to kriya & brings her to rey & makes her to stand beside him n gives her hand in his hand n make them dance..rey gets shocked seeing this,..}

Kisike itne paas ho ke sabse dur ho gaye' {& goes off back..}

Ajeeb daasta hain ye'{a tear rolls down taanis cheek then.}

Rohan:comes to taani keeps his elbow on her shoulder}

Hehehe'ahahah'ahaaahaha[goes back n sings]

Yaha kal kya ho kisne jana

Zindagi ek safar hain suhana

yaha kal kya ho kisne jana'.{pulls her make her to dance with him..}

Udalayi udlayi uooo Udalayi udlayi ooo..

Udalayi udlayi uooo Udalayi uuooo..{taani , rohan & whole team except rey start dancing'.}

Udalayi udlayi uooo Udalayi udlayi ooo..{rohan shouts in excitement n then suddenly rain starts & all moves bck..taani also tries to go'..bt rey pulls taani closer to him'very much closer &sings}

Tum paas aaye

Yu muskuraye'.{seeing this all gets shocks & taani tries to move bck seeing team b trey don't allow her to move n continuesly sings}

Tum paas aaye

Yu muskuraye'

Tumne na jane kya sapne dikhaye'

Abh to mera dil jage na sota hain{with one hand holds her waist tightly & keeps the othr hand on her chek..}

Kya karu haaye kuch kuch hota hain

Kya karu haaye kuch kuch hota hain

kuch kuch hota hain

kuch kuch hota hain

{whole team gets shock then taani get scared n rey start singing that

mehendi laga ke rakhna doli sajake rakhna'

{thn all thinks rey was joking..they ignore & theyalso start dancing to make everyone thinkthe same she goes to rey n taani n sings}

Rey: mehendi laga ke rakhna doli sajake rakhna'

lene tujhe oh gori

aayenge tere sajna'.

Sharon:--to taani

mehendi laga ke rakhna doli sajake rakhna'

mehendi laga ke rakhna doli sajake rakhna'

lene tujhe oh gori

aayenge tere sajna'.

Rey:---mehendi laga ke rakhna doli sajake rakhna'

Rey &Sharon:--mehendi laga ke rakhna doli sajake rakhna'

All:---shava shva ohohoh shava shava{bt taani gets upset n stand there looking at rey who was deeply lost in dancing n enjoying'}

All:shava shva ohohoh shava shava shava shva ohohoh shava shava shava shva ohohoh shava shava''''''''''''''.{all laughs n song get finished n rey hugs taani n kriya sees this a all other hug there patners n does nt notice kriya,rey n taani..}

Edited by rajkumaripari - 12 years ago
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guys i will send u buddy list tomorrow...so tht it will be easy for me to pm u all...
so as early as possible add me guys...

& i wanted to ask as it is dil dosti dance...we r planning & writing so many song sequences...so i hope u all dnt mind it...& r happy...

guys plzzz comment abt the parts...wat is the bst thing in the post,...which line or dialouge u liked alot...


love taarey...😉
Edited by rajkumaripari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome updates...just love them all...rey getting so dam jealous seeing rohan and taani's friendship and the antakshari and chilli eating part and that IDIOT waala aprt were fab...update soon
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It was awesum:) taani scolding rey wow then taarey dance and looks:) nice parts :) enjoyed it all :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow u did an amazing job, love jealous Rey😉 eating chillies lol, it was so romantic love all the songs you use. espically the one u use from mujhse dosti karoge it has little bit of everything, fun, sadness, romance I love it. My only problem is I wish I understand Hindi 😭 but I still love both parts😃
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Loved it.

The song sequence are awesome.
Especially Tanni's "Ajeeb dastan hai yen" and rey's tum pas aaye and mehandi lagake rakhna.

also like the jealous rey and the chilli eating competition.

can't wait for the next part so pls. update soon.





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OMG!! these two parts where filled with awesomeness
i loved the part when rey eats chillies, and how rey gets soo jealous by seeing taani's and rohan's friendship

overall great updates 😛
please add me to you pm list thanx 😃

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