Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
lovely update dear...
m loving this cupid sharon...
tanni -shivam..in love ...good good...
plz continue soon dear
Thank u Deepika😃
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Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
lovely update dear...
m loving this cupid sharon...
tanni -shivam..in love ...good good...
plz continue soon dear
Originally posted by: Swaron17
loved da frdship bond betwen them
nyce update...:-)
Originally posted by: marauder
Ye to bazinga ho gaya :P. Was not expecting this. But I am upst there ws no SwaRon in it :( Looking forward to the next update with some awesome SwaRon moment in it.
P.S - Update faster.
Originally posted by: lassipriya
interesting n nice concept..👏
plz pm me wen u update nxt time..
hey frnds dis is d 5th part hope u gyz like it & thanx for support
chapter 5
Swayam ws just so happy for such warm wel come & he was thinking abt Sharon
Swayam: wt d hell is going on God 1stly aap muje kisi ladki se mulvate ho & dn ussi ke sath fight & I just don't kn me iski ankho me lost ho jata hu jabhi bhi wo meri or dekhti he kuch samaj me nai a raha tha ye bond & ab wo ladki jiske sath subah se fight hi ke he usi ke ghar pe hu & wtz ……….. wo ladki wo hi he Gautam uncle ki beti jo ki bachpan me meri kafi achci frnd hua kartithi jiske bareme samjata hua tab se sirf sunhi raha tha papa ki bato me dat ke me usse bachpn me bahot hi pareshan kiya tha jab sirf ek baar ham yanha kuch dino ke liye aye the & tab wo meri kafi close fnd bhi ban chuki thi bt mene nai soch tha ki wo iss tarah mere samne ayegi
Sach me hw inocentshe is jo bolna hota he muh pe boltihe & chudidar & dupatta dekhne me & sochne me bhi weard lagta he par wo pehnti he. Dance bhi karti he & achchi student bhi he aa topper he college ki , GS ki responsibily bhi sambhalti he ….jab wo hasti he to seems like sare world ka happiness ussi ke liye he God n world ki sari pourity usssi ko di he, her lips like red rozes creat a magic jo sabko apna bana leta he, dimples jo itne cute he jst like a child , etes are soo deep like an ocean is der hidden in dem ….
(Rey come der suddenly & ask swayam )
Rey: hey swayam kya dinner nai karna & kya soch raha tha ???
Swayam : wo shar.. ( he comes in sence…) are kuch nai wo me to bas ese hi ..tring to find some excuse..
Rey: wt shar…. Uske bareme soch raha tha kya ( teasing tone) kafi cute he & innocent bhi hena ??
Swayam: hesistly …mu.je kya malim me ussebat thodina karta hu & by d wy wo aapki frnd bani he meri nai ..
Rey : so wt & man ya na maan bt tu ussi ke bare me soch raha tha wo he hi itni sweet..:)
Swayam : sweet ha janta hu tabhi to fight kar rahi thi mere sath
Rey: woo w it was also ur foult nt of her only k & koi bhi stranger uske hi college me ak ussi se loid tone me baat karega den wo gussa to hogi hi na..
Swayam : hey u tu ja ha & don't try o b her lowyr frnt to me
Rey: y u being hyper mene tuje pehle bhibola ttha & abhi bhi bol rha hu because of her u r being hyper so belv or nt he affects u swaym & abhi khana ho to ajana kichten me warna stay here with her thoughts ..
Swayam: me koi hyper nai ho rah hu & muje kisi bhi cheez se koifrk nai padta
Rey: jate jate Haa haa dikh raha he me jaraha hu ana ho to aa jana….
Swayam: (to himself) wt d he** r u doing haa ? u r swayam ..Swayam Shekhawat college ke sabse populr boy sari girls ka dream boy & wo kisike bareme itna despert hoke soch raha tha
Nooo no ways koi bhi girl ese ruleover nai kar saktu d Swayam se
So stop to think abt her & kuch nai sochna h uske bare me na achcha na bura kuch nai & gose for dinner
On otherhand Sharon & taani come back to sharon's home
Every one was waiting for dem for dinner & swayam hs also come & try to eing normal bt more over he become silent cos of sharon'r thought & all
Rey: hey Sharon where were u yaar u kn we r witing for u??
Sharon: wo me bas Tanni ka saman lene gait hi soo
Rey: cool man mean ab ye hamre sath rehgi right.?
Sharon: ha to abb chale khana khane
Every one is busy with deir khana bt d two souls r just lost in deir own world ( Shivam & Tanni) . Sharon ke papa uske hi sath khana khane ka wait kar rahe the as always papa ki pyari beti ke bina wo nai khate
Sharon: so guyz aapko kesa laga hamara khana ?
Kriya : after such long tym ghar ka & spsly maa ka bana khana kha rahe he & warna roj to jo servant bana dete he wo hi khate he without love …
Vickey : haa yaar sach me aap sab kitna ek duje k liye intence ho yaar warna ham to bas sab apni lyf me mast rehtehe kisik sath kisi or k litym hi nai hota he
Sharon: are don't be sad aap sab ho na yanha to ham sab khul ke enjoy karenge wese khan eke baad ka kya plan he??
Simmi : are yaar kuch interesting sa karte he like ply some games or antaxari?
Nil: are nai yaar ye ladkiyo ko antaxri ke alava koi gam kntu nai ata?? Let's play video game..
Rey: no nil wo to ham roj hi karte rehte he soo think something else..
(every one was thinking abt wat to ply & swaron say together truth or dare??)
Evey one: hey good Sharon & swayam..:D
Rey: wt a chemistry haa swaym !!! now wt u say??
Swayam: it'sjust co incidence ok..
Rey : haa sabco incident hi he tera fight na karna , uski ankho me khona , uske khayalo me khona & nw k jesa ans bhi kya bat…. kya baat…..
Swayam: shut up rey mene pehle bhibola he & now also sying stop talking like dat..
Rey : u kn pehle tu uske bareme sochna chod de den I'll leave to talk abt dat.
Swaym :fine abhi khana khaye .on anger tone
Gautam uncle ne dek liya swayam ko in gusse wala mood so he ask him
Mr Raiprakash: wayam beta kya hua koi problem he?? Tum kuch pareshn dikh rhe ho..
Rey: (to swayam in lower tone) bol na tu shar ke bareme soch raha tha..;) confuse ku ho raha he…
Swaym : no uncle nothing like dat wo bas thoda thak gaya tha soo (to rey) tu just do ur dinner
M Raiprakash : ohh to khana khate hi tum soo jana ha wese kesa lag raha he itne samy ke bad apne villege m??
Swayam: uncle it's soo good I ust love dis place pourity & peace & all I just love it.
Rey: (to swayam) ha ha love dis place & ppl …. pourity & peace& innocence of a girl..;)
Mr Raiprakash: tab achcha he subhah aap log yanha paasme janha jana ho ja sakte ho Nadi kinare jana achcha lagega & also take visit of farms..
Swayam : ha uncle jarur ..:) we'll definetly go
Mr Raiprakash: me Sharon ko bol deta hu aap sabkowo le jaye .sharon beta aap sabko hamara ganv thik se dikhana & Nadi kinare & sab jagah le jana kal
Sharon : ha papa
(after dinner as deir plan dey started truth & dare)
Sab circl me set ho gaye & d game start d first turn of Vickey & He chooze dare sohe was aksed to prapose Neha in a Mumbaiya stly
"Vickey : Neha apnko yere se pyar ho gayela he & apn apna sara lyf tere sath ich bitaneko angta he to kya tu degi mra sath"
Neha hold his hand & game start agn
It's Nil's turn he chooz truth
He is asked to tell d name of d girl he feels for & abhi tak he has never tell officially to simmi bt now it's tym he tell her name & she feel dat heaven comes on earth & hug him soo tightly ..
Agn game start & shivam's turn comes
He chooz truth & Sharon also go chance & sh decided t ask question
Sharon: bhai give d name of girl whom u love d most …
Shivam : shocked of such suddn situation sha…shar..sharon kya bolrahi he tu??
Sharon: ha bhai apnehi chooz liya he & dragged her close bhai yahi chancehe so plz sy d truth..plz bhai..
Shaivam: wo wo …
All : cheers her with Shivam Shivam
Shivam: Tanni
Tanni: kya??
Shivam: ha Tanni woo I just love U & don't kn kabse ..jab ham sath me khlth tabse pyar karta hu & jab ham tumhara homework sath karte the tab se pyar karta hu, jab tym chotu chotu bato per o deti thi tabse pyar karta hu, or me bhi nai janta kab se pyar karta hu.
Tanni : shivam….
He cut her between & put his finger on her lip .Shhh
Shivam: kuch nai bolna & me bhijanta hu dat u also love me …
Tanni : feel shy & her cheeks get red …
(as everyone clp hnd dey get in snce & all cheep for dem & congrats dem)
Agn bottle spin & it's swayam's turn
Truth or dare Sharon ask???
Rey :swayam to truth hi lega hen swayam??( me usse us girl ke bare me puch lunga & nai liya tooo bhi sach to niklva hi lunga ajj hi he myst speek d truth)
Swayam: knyu ?? & nt I'm with dare??
Sharon : sure??
Swyam: ha khyu?? I'm sure damn sure..
Sharon : ok den u….Rey cut her
Rey : hy Sharon plz me?? Can I ??
Sharon : ha ha y nt..
Rey :thanx J
Swaym you hv to dance with dat girl abt whom u were thinking before sometime..who is affecting u..
Swayam: shut up .. & no girl is affecting me samje .. & m kisi ke bare me nai soch raha tha..
Rey: den who is dat ggirl whose name start from sh….( swaym cut him )
Swayam : rey wt r u doing?? & sab ke samne wt d h** r u doing??
Rey: d only dat u r trying to hide understand ..
Swayam: I'm not hiding any thing ..just change it it'r of no mean ( I'm also confuse abt my feeling)
Rey: ok den esa kuch nai he we accept den dance with Sharon.. slow dance..
Swayam & Sharon: wt??
Rey: ha achcah he na frndship ki best starting hogi ..wtz say gyz?
All ya swayam u hv to do dis..
Swayam: ask Sharon goes near Sharon & bent on her knee like a true gentleman ask her for dance
sharon shall we??
Sharon: hazitatly put her hand in him & dance start
D song start
Pehla Nasha …pehla nasha
Of course rey played dis song bt perfectly suted on swaron ..when sharon put her hand in his hand she feel some thing dat never happn before every thing is stopped for a moment both get lost on eachother's eyes swaym take her hand put it on his shoulder & take d another in his hand he slowly cought her weist & pull her close to him.
Sharon just feel like dat it's d moment wtz her dream her price charming, dis r d hnd in which she feel all d comfort of her lyf , wo ankhe jo usse dekh rahi he usime jse uski sari duniya sama ja rahi he der is something new, soething jo usse lag raha tha ki shayad it's all for her he is d only one who cn rule over her lyf
Swaym also feel dat koi to bathe jo different he, kuch esajo ki samj nai a raha he something like k jo usse uskeh blf se dur le jar aha he. He feel dat he is in some other world janha swaron kea lava koi or nai he & d music stars ..
Pehala nasha pehla khuma . naya pyar he naya inteza….
Sara tym wo dono khoy hue the ek dusre ki ankho me & lag rha tha ki unki duniya bs yanhi he …
Bt song complt hu & everone clap for both of dem ..
Rey: wah swyam kya hua kis world me chala gaya tha ha?
Swayam: dis tym kuch ans nai diya con he also confused ki wt was dat he just felt before some tym.
Sharon feel so incomfertable after dance so wo kiychen chali gai for coffe
Sharon monolig
Wtz wrong with u ? ha hokya rha tha tuje & tu jo ki collg ke bhi kisi bande aaj tak bagar kamm k baat hi nai karti wo uske sath dance ha?? Sharon raiprakash k ho kya gaya tha?? Bt koi nai abb alertrehna ha.. ek to subhah se mule he tab se sirf fight to hua tha & suddenly dance …she made coffee for very one d game chalta raha late night tak with other …
Next morning swayam sab se pehle uth gaya tha coz usse lag raha tha ki sharon wanha se iss dance ke baad chali gayi soo wo uske uthne ka wait kar raha tha bt sharon ke sath sb ladkiya bhi thi so wo apne aap ko sharon se jusyfy nai kar paya as elderlu plan sab ne villag visit liya & ghume bt swayam all d way trying to talk to sharon & sharon is trying to ignore him coz both r feeling dat de is something between dem so…
Pura din nikal gaya bt swayam ussebat nai kar paya & soo he was thoda sad bt usse laga wo raat ko sorry bol dega usske sath without her permisn dnace karne ke liye bt agn datnight he also not gtdat chance & nextday fires wohi sara din kese chala gaya kisiko pata nai chala witout swaroncoz sharon ko bhi laga raha tha ki swaym kya soch raha hoga ki uske sath itna zagada honeke baad bhi uske sath sara dence kiya & so wo bhi usse se dur hi rh rahi thi bt for swayam day is d only chance coz bext day early morning unhe jana tha so a latenight jabsab sone chale gaye wo jagta raha & jab usse laga ki sab so gye wo chpke se utha & sharonke room ki or gaya jab wo whna pihcha tab sharonhi jag rahi thi bed p bethe bethe soch rahi thi kuch & swayam waws his hand bt sharon os lost in her thought so he jumps in her room & go to sharon .. seeinh him like dat in her room sharon was shocked …
Hey gys hope dis one is not soo boring part
Plz give ur valuable comments..😃
Beeny..😃
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