The First Five Times - Five: Pg 21 - Page 11

I am really eager to see if they are meeting or not. If yes then on what point.
You should write one story from that point onwards... 😃

Fantastic part...superb...Loved it...their first meeting in delhi...the old scenes seriously makes me smile so much :)

Originally posted by: nayika

Not at all!

I just had comments to reply to! You still have two chances on this particular story :D

Khushi really does have issues. I mean Arnav has issues yes but the show never really deals with Khushi always thinking she knows best :P

DM isn't working in this series as you can plainly see!

I know re you didn't do it intentionally. Par puche ka padi 😃

Khushi has sooo many issues. But wait! Once the first couple of months ended the show started having issues. Ab kare bhi toh kya? 😭

I meant on the show the DM worked overtime to let them meet and make them come closer. Now take the rain hug. She was standing in the middle of the road. In plain view. A car was speeding by. The car didn't get time to veer away but Arnav did to run to her, hold her, twirl them away and do an out-of-the-world rabba vey... Nope. I am not bashing. I loooveee the scebe. Therefore, I love DM!

Let's just say if you had to continue this, in your head would you make them meet after the first five misses???

You still have two chances on this particular story :D Ummed pey dunya kaayam hain 😊

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

I know re you didn't do it intentionally. Par puche ka padi 😃

Khushi has sooo many issues. But wait! Once the first couple of months ended the show started having issues. Ab kare bhi toh kya? 😭

I meant on the show the DM worked overtime to let them meet and make them come closer. Now take the rain hug. She was standing in the middle of the road. In plain view. A car was speeding by. The car didn't get time to veer away but Arnav did to run to her, hold her, twirl them away and do an out-of-the-world rabba vey... Nope. I am not bashing. I loooveee the scebe. Therefore, I love DM!

Let's just say if you had to continue this, in your head would you make them meet after the first five misses???

You still have two chances on this particular story :D Ummed pey dunya kaayam hain 😊

The story will be complete in the five parts! Don't worry.

fab new SS! loved all three updates! its great reliving the intial scenes! too good and thanks for the pm :)

Particularly loved this line. Just goes to show that for all his bravado and hard exterior, ASR is not a monster:

Originally posted by: Risha.J

Particularly loved this line. Just goes to show that for all his bravado and hard exterior, ASR is not a monster:

He looked up into the rear view mirror relieved at least to see the girl was wearing a helmet at least.

I definitely think ASR in the beginning wasn't particularly cruel to people unless he thought they merited it. We saw a lot of anger on his part directed towards Khushi but to his thinking it was all justified based on things she'd done to him.

Now this is one unique concept!!!!

The sense of feeling incomplete in Arnav in the first chapter...to the scene in the Dargah which was really magical...to the third chapter...where despite his annoyance...Arnav still checks to see if "that girl" has a helmet on and feels better when her sees her with one..beautifully described and recaptured !!!!

Khushi's collision with arnav's car.. the vryy same day frm whr i startd watching the shw !)
nd nayika yu portrayd the same incident vry beautifully in yur wordz.. !)
Love yuu babe [<3]