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Posted: 12 years ago
#91
^Yes she was on the wrong side of the road :-D

why did you update chupke se?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92
r

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nayika! You are mocking me???

I wait for a chance to be on the same page as you and you fill it up with your own comments??? I am glaring at you and pouting at the same time.

Now to the update, it is sooo Khushi to think that she was on the right lane and can give a lecture to the other person righteously. And it is so Arnav to think of time and money.

Yes, there are some odd 12,000 people for Khushi to run into but she runs into him. That's DM working overtime! I love DM!

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My friends call me Rasgulla 😊
Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93
Ooohhh!!! I love the concept, I love how you've written what they're thinking and how they feel!! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: lazyleaves

^Yes she was on the wrong side of the road :-D

why did you update chupke se?



Chupke se? Kaise?

It's on the forum, plain for everyone to see!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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They are not going to meet, are they? Till the first five meetings are done? You are turning into a mystery writer...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

r

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nayika! You are mocking me???

I wait for a chance to be on the same page as you and you fill it up with your own comments??? I am glaring at you and pouting at the same time.

Now to the update, it is sooo Khushi to think that she was on the right lane and can give a lecture to the other person righteously. And it is so Arnav to think of time and money.

Yes, there are some odd 12,000 people for Khushi to run into but she runs into him. That's DM working overtime! I love DM!

Edited again:

My friends call me Rasgulla 😊



Not at all!

I just had comments to reply to! You still have two chances on this particular story :D

Khushi really does have issues. I mean Arnav has issues yes but the show never really deals with Khushi always thinking she knows best :P

DM isn't working in this series as you can plainly see!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Polkadots78

They are not going to meet, are they? Till the first five meetings are done? You are turning into a mystery writer...😃



Haha, I've never done mystery yet! Perhaps I should start :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98
NAYIKA I CANNOT GET OVER THE PERFECTION SITTING IN YOUR DHABBA.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: nayika



Haha, I've never done mystery yet! Perhaps I should start :P


Yes you should...you will be amazing at it...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: curledup

NAYIKA I CANNOT GET OVER THE PERFECTION SITTING IN YOUR DHABBA.



Erm... *drunk alert!* 😉

On a serious note: What is a dhabba? My index?

In which case, thank you! :P

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