FF|Arhi|Th#3 How IPK should've been[Ch18/Sc3 Pg117 - Page 63

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva

Res for Smitaa! 😃

Comment when ur back!

~~~~~~ Yeah ! I am back lovelies !!!! ~~~~~~~~

Shwethaaa !!!

Awww love you so much fr this meri jaan ...bada wala hug 🤗
Missed you both ...and ASR 😉

So glad to be back ...Smita, what a rocking update woman !!!

Rongte khade ho gaye ..solid !!! Awww it broke my heart to see first Khushi like that, shocked, numbed to the core ...after the press conference...

And then my darling Arnav ...awww !!! I respect him all the more now ...love to pehle se hi hai dammit !!!😛

Take a bow today smitzy, for having Arnav reach out to Khushi the way he did at the press conference ...i had to get my palm up, in front of my face twice to realise what you meant ...

AWESOME !!!👏👏👏

Loved the way he handled the kostins ...

I like your Akash, much more responsible ...loved the Nani-Anjali interaction too ...very cute ..Like purana IPK ! Reminded me of the Poolside scene when Khushi kisses Arnav first time in front of them, and they suspect somethings fishy !!!

* yeah, youre right...silly grin back again *

Uff and the scene after that just made me cry ...awww ! 😭So beautifully written, one could actually visualise Arnav's shock on discovering Khushi the way he did, his anger, his concern, his love, his need ...awww !!!😭🤗

The bestest bestest ever gesture was when he puts his socks on her ...uff hats off woman !! Romance Queen !!! 😛 My heart just went thud - thud and would't stop at all ...beautiful ! 👏 Loved her reaction on discovering those too ...awww !!! 😳

And the way he felt when he saw her cold body lying on his bed, to the way he wanted to hold her, touch her but realised and accepted that it was not the right time to do it...even when he didn't want to let go ...to the standard sexy "tum theek ho ? " n the morning ...Haaai !!!

Bloody brilliant !!!👏

Now to Khushi ... I am just so glad you picked up on this angle, she accepts that its her who misunderstood ...and its in her nature to equate everything and everybody ...she realises she is at fault too ...the mere mention of the BigRing wali MU gave me goosebumps ya ...all the way through ...i am so glad Arnav spoke up ...main kyun todunga rishta ? Wah !!!👏

She must feel shit after that !!! I know she does, which is why she said what she said in her defiance ...wah !!!👏

And she runs away ...so cute ...so Khushi !😃

Haan Arnav bitwa, hope hai ...bas ap lage rahiye , till she gives in, as you promised yourself !!!

Frikkin awesome smitzy !!!!

I cannot explain how happy I am to be a part of this IPK journey with you lot ...thank you !!!

**** group hug *****🤗

PS - i really did want to stop at rocking update! and do the rest of the comment tomorrow ...But ruka nahi gaya ...smitzy, you rock !!!!

Mwaaah xxx

Originally posted by: fairy_stardust

Res

I can't believe I got this spot...was just looking at the replies and saw your post. 😆

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😆@ Khushi's outburst of the truth...thank you for clearing the MU!
Felt so bad for Khushi as she walked back to her room and tried to comprehend what she just saw...what it mean for her and their relationship. Then the realization that she was no different from ASR when she jumped to conclusion was bulb lighting moment. Akash was so nice to keep walking behind and keep an eye on her. Sweet jeeja ji!

Itni sardi mein she slept😲 I could feel her numbness and pain as she mulled over everything that happened. Good go, Arnav found her in time to place her on the warm bed.

Her reactions on seeing Arnav was priceless🤣 and the moment when the both just sat while Khushi stared at his ring hand was sweet. I am starting to forgive Arnav slowly as he becomes wiser in this FF😊

Khushi ran again! *smacks my head* Iss larki ka kya hoga? 😉

Originally posted by: maansi12

Good... Khushi misunderstands as well... Nice update!!!

Originally posted by: segad

😃

Caring Arnav. reminded me of the nainital dhabba. her reactions in the morning and his reading of those reactions were wonderfully described. could almost see them unfold.

Originally posted by: msbluff

coool 👍🏼

Originally posted by: panck

You had to stop at Khushi..., didn't you??

What extreme cruelty making me wonder what next.

Fantastic update

Have stopped watching the show but the FF especially yours are so well written that they keep me hooked to IF

Great work...

Originally posted by: kbtr

Hi smitzy!

Was away and so could not read/reply.

Have just finished reading the last scenes and all I can say is, please, would you please pay a visit to the the CVs and explain to them how to save IPKKND? In fact, just give them your scenes! Better yet, join the team. That way, at least we know we'll get IPKKND instead of a B grade run of the mill thriller or mystery or whatever else takes their fancy at that time!

Your scenes were great, since I watched them altogether, I'll just make one comment. Which might be pretty long and all over the place. Sorry!

Loved how the press conference was handled by ASR (YAH!!! Got to see his shatir dimaag - that seems to have gone for lunch in reel life! I mean every body and their dog seems to have a one up on poor ASR in the show. Now he's going to be made a fool of by a woman. That he hasn't seen for God knows how many years! Ah! But let's not taint your story with that crap!) The ring! Brilliant! And he made sure she was watching!! Ah! SHATIR DIMAAG!!! MUAAHHH!!! Especially loved the way he rescued her and took care of her. And how he controlled himself. Brownie points! Enjoyed the almost amusing scene in the morning when she got up and was completely spaced out! Haha! The way you describe that and her mutterings, that was so classic.

Now, I've said this before, perhaps many times, but I'll say it again - you have a very eloquent way of describing things that makes the environment so real. I felt the surroundings. The sun in her eyes...

And then you did it again! Left me hanging! After giving him an enormous, gigantic drop of hope, she runs away! And I die! Yah! I think cliffhangers should be banned!

So.

Now he knows that she did not want to end things with him. Now what?

I still don't want him to forget that he left her at the altar!!

That he discarded her with no more than a second thought. With a complete disregard to her feelings and emotions. And her reputation.

Discarded like an old t-shirt. Without a second thought.

How? How the hell can he redeem himself of that? As far as I am concerned, there is nothing he can do or say that will atone him. And to add fuel to the fire, what if Dad's diary was never found? Would he still go after her? Is his love unconditional?

So I'm really intrigued to find out how you do this. Because I do want them to be together. And yeah, if you love someone you forgive them anything, blah, blah, blah! ... (still seems like a copout to me!)

Ahh! But Kushi being Kushi...

Must say though, he gets an A for effort!

OK, I'll end my essay here! Thanks for the PMs. 😃 Waiting to see what happens next!