FF|Arhi|Th#3 How IPK should've been[Ch18/Sc3 Pg117 - Page 14

Originally posted by: kbtr

Haila! smitzy, loved the update (short!!!) Everything was great, except I feel Kushi is melting. Please, please, please, don't make Kushi give in too soon. Yes, eventually, she should forgive him - but not so easily. He has shredded up her heart. He needs to go through the same fear, otherwise, he will never realize her worth.

Hey, I wish the CVs could see this IPK - the one we have in reel life nowadays is such a drab B-grade vomitory! It doesn't even feel like a love story anymore, with no ArShi love scenes either! So thank-you for writing this the RIGHT way. This really is the way IPK should have been!

Thanks for the PM. And oh yeah! Please excuse the ever-ready complaint of your updates being too short. You know I'm a greedy one for your scenes!😃

Waiting for the next scene.

Originally posted by: nazibah

Arnav kneeling on the ground looking like a schoolboy...that would be adorable!!! I can't wait to read how Khushi reacts when she realises he's come to apologise! Loved the update!! Thanks for the PM!!

Originally posted by: smitzy

hahahaha hello ladies 😛 ya I figured I didn't reply to the comments last time so might as well do that now.. I made a video about this ff and it is currently uploading on youtube. also, I've not started writing the scene yet 😆 so I'm thinking this would be a late update again

Originally posted by: risat

I must say u r an amazing writer. The way u have maintained the consistency of the story so far, balanced each and every character is just incredible. I thought u'll be late with this update but I am really happy that u could post it sooner. Again an excellent update. I liked Khushi's monologue (This is exactly how Khushi is) and Arnav's confusion and insecurities (I kinda felt for this poor soul). But Arnav on his knees apologizing to Garima was a little bit out of his character. To me this is the gesture from him that is reserved only for his Khushi and no one else. That is what I felt after reading the update. Thanku again for this wonderful story and for the PM. Keep writing 😃

Originally posted by: adddhan

Cute n interesting! Wondering if this story could be given top priority and finished first and then the others?

Originally posted by: babli0204

Again the first thing I have done is to read this as I have turned ny laptop on. it is becomg such a habit now-a-days. How would I survive the mornings once this FF is over?!?!?!?

The last scene is so appropriate for the story!! Love the way Arnav kneeled before Garima to apologise for everything!

Khushi you better watch out for this new and changed Arnav. You are the only one person he allowed to see his true self ! Don't yo know when your rakshas, khadoos, laad governer loves and cares, he does it with so much heartfelt honesty and overwhelming passion that everything pales against it ?

You have admitted it yourself as you have uttered the words:
"Woh to aadhi raat ko pagalon ki tarah Dilli se bhage bhage yahan isiliye aaye, kyunki unko laga humara operation hua hai!"


Anyway, eagerly waiting for the next part!!!

THANKS A LOT for the PMs.

Originally posted by: cutiepreet

U have an amazing ff going on ...:)

Love it n really hope that real ipk should have been like this although I'm happy that arhi got married but didn't like the tremendous change in Arnav in just 1 episode...!

Soon I'm happy to read u story as its very realistic :)

Cont soon

Originally posted by: Kurup

a totallly sanka devi update...loved khusi and her acts here. Felt bad for Arnav..How he was treated by Khushi, but i thik he deserved it..afterall he has been rude to khushi...and the way he said sorry to garima was heart touching...

thnx for the PM dear..

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Loved it. Love Khushi chomping on her carrot and talking so like her ...aranv on the ground asking forgiveness ...now I am in a dilemma I want them to get together soon and not waste time...but now am getting inclined towards her forgiving him !

Originally posted by: fairy_stardust

Why do I always read your updates late?! *smacks my head, accepting my fate*
But THANK YOU for updating. Not knowing what will ensue when the Raizadas meet the Guptas was killing me. LOL at Khushi's military like questioning and her sudden change in behavior seeing Nani + family. And for the first time since their shaadi broke I actually feel bad for Arnav...like I wanted redemption and all so I thought acha hai Khuhsi ne usse jaara...but today the whole time when they were traveling to K's home he felt nauseated and was motivating himself. Aww!

Aur itne pyaar se Garima se baat kiya and bended down for apology. Can't wait to see what will Khushi & Payal do. Payalia looking gorgeous and saying that in front of family 😆 Very apt.

I think when Khushi realizes that he came all the way to Lucknow from Delhi just to see if she was alright was like a light bulb lighting up moment. *idea!* But remembering all past moment was painful for her. Good scene.