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Kalyaani B Rao

@Kalyaani

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Thank you for being the reason behind my smile. Each time I read anything written by you, I feel it. It may bring a tear, a sad smile or a toothy grin, I hold you responsible.

There are times when I hate you for the things you write and at the same time I love what you write. I wonder...would reading be the same...as I always compare the stories with yours. Almost with certainty, they pale in comparison.

Is the advantage unfair? I think not, words fail me and I agree some things are best left unsaid.

Edited by Kalyaani - 12 years ago

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Sweet OS...brilliantly penned..👏

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sun_shine_girl

@sun_shine_girl

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Exquisite, brilliant,beautiful...

A rainy evening, cars stuck in traffic, little boys selling flowers and peanuts, Arnav reminiscing about Khushi, catching sight of her in the auto, talking about their college days and finally the kiss, the acceptance.

Their love has finally found its destination...

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charlotte74

@charlotte74

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Brought back some old memories ... beautiful as usual Sona...

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

This is a fairtytale.. I so loved it.. ❤️

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

awww...it was wonderful...👏🤗

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duncanelise

@duncanelise

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

I'm running out of things to say for the way you write. I'm blown away by the ambience even before the actual plot reveals itself. Some thing about your stories reminds me of my school days. The whole plot is just so essentially Indian.

I think you should really try your hand at professional writing. This story reminded me of this book called Ancient Promises by Jaishree Misra. The story is completely different from hers but the whole ambience of it, Delhi and the school and college... Just lovely...