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indiavizion

@indiavizion

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Posted: 12 years ago

#11

ur stories r totally diff...and i just love them

here also they were meant to be together...and so they r...

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SaJanLuv14

@SaJanLuv14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Shona <3 how I wish that something like this would happen in my world, you make reality sound so beautiful and you make love sound so simple when I read your oneshots, though idk how I would have handled the 4 years if that guy was with another girl,but the faith and friendship would definitely have me going and just wishing the best, the love here was so pure and so true, and silently you portrayed how unrequited can be so beautiful and can be bearable/worth it in the end 😃

the nuts part was so cute btw 😆 adorable, beautiful, and simple, loved it to bits!

wanted to write a longer comment but u know the workload is

regardless can't wait for your next one!

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YPNHK_kiFANno.1

@YPNHK_kiFANno.1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

You've captured such a special, intimate whirl of emotion between two people beautifully. A universal theme, luckily for this couple it was a truly, happy beginning! 👏

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Beautiful...Sona...Brilliant...You really do justice to the stories...there isn't a word which can be exempted in the story...Its too perfect...Thanks for the PM

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tsultana

@tsultana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Brilliant!! Sooo touching. Thanku for the pm

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SunriseGreen

@SunriseGreen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

That was freaking beautiful. I just love the simplicity of your stories! That's what makes them so magical <3 So happy that Arnav and Khushi met again after so long only be reunited forever

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mak3mesmile

@mak3mesmile

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Ahhh, so sweet and cute. I love the fact that your stories are so relatable.

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

So evocative. This section below seems to tell me everything this Khushi's heart holds for that Arnav.

maya

The second he mumbled a soft hi, her lips parted, as she drew in air, which sounded more like a gasp to him.

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#19

Just wow! I was lost in this OS. Your writing is just so sublime.

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sneaky-aj

@sneaky-aj

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#20

aww!!! it was so cute and adorable that it bought a big smile to my face!😃
i take it that this story is inspired from you own life?😳
would love to know if the ending was similar to this one!😳