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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

I WANT MY CHILDHOOD BACK!!!!!! I WANT THOSE COLLEGE MOMENTS BAACCKK!!!!!! ;(((( you made me want to go back to the past and relive those moments... loveddd it

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Your OS is "Words Left Unsaid"

And here I sit, speechless.

This was just beautiful.

I can't describe what I felt when reading this!

It made me feel as happy and light!

I would definitely love to read more... anything by you! :D

So glad I came across this!

Please don't mind if I Buddy you!

Edited by Titaliya_AP - 12 years ago

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piccola1

@piccola1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Splendidly put together, Misty! It was enthralling !

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

thanks for the PM

great OS

After so many years he found her.

She loved him always and he did too, just that he did not understand his feelings.

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

This was cutely romantic...Its awesome...loved it to the T. It reminded me of my crush but alas he's married :D

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soaringskies

@soaringskies

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

aweee...misty there is something about what u write...i am moved everytime, by ur every piece of writing...!!😳😳

awesome...😃😃😃

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

i loved it...wow amazingly written...cute story

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emistry

@emistry

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

This has got be one of the best Os!! loved it!!

Love the emotions.. and the flashbacks!

PS- you should make an index! It makes it it easier for me to go re-read everything!

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AngelTeen

@AngelTeen

Stunner

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Hayye.

*Pauses*

Hayye.

*Thinks back about someone*

Hayye.

So beautiful, Sona! I had this smile on my face and while I type this comment, I am feeling slightly melancholic...I really dont know how to put into words what I am feeling here...but just that I connected with this and this Khushi a lot - that feeling of unrequited love and how one wishes that the ending for such stories in real life would be the same but lets see...and if not, one can always come back and read this and feel a bit better and dream a little more, right? :)

I specially loved this paragraph -

"Probably the last words he had said to her all those years ago were All The Best, right before the campus placements took place. And that small interaction had been interrupted abruptly by Rizu, taking him away from her, yet again. Rizu and him, they had been together throughout their college years, briefly breaking off due to Rizu's relationship with a senior named Varun, but that was long before Rizu had found her way back with Arnav, as college was about to end. Khushi didn't feel jealous, she just acutely felt the loss of a friend, the only boy probably who she had let close enough to hurt her, or rather affect her, in any way. She had made herself understand, that even though she liked him, he might not have felt the same way. Unrequited or not, she still couldn't keep the happiness out of her heart if he spoke to her, even once during the whole day, or glanced at her whilst entering the class. And if all that and stalking him on Facebook was not enough, he had stupidly called her Beautiful one fine day. And that day was probably the first time she had realized that maybe, just maybe she loved him, and he might have had some feelings for her."

And also the part where she does all those things for Arnav and he noticed it all along, pehle bol deta yaar! :)

And I agree with Varsha, your OS' are like Teri Meri Love Stories episodes...only better, much better. :)

Exquisite job. As usual the descriptions, the background setting (the rain and the traffic) were brilliant.

And the story toh...*smiles* :)

*Added

And you said this was inspired by true events...kya baat! ;) :D

Kitne Haldirams ke packet khareede the, Sona? Btw, ab Haldiraam ki moofli khaate waqt, main iss OS ke baare mein sochoongi aur tumhaare and your mystery boy ke sweet sweet romance ke baare mein! Awww! :)

Edited by AngelTeen - 12 years ago