SwaRon FF: Lost in Love - Page 7

Originally posted by: marauder

Now this is what I call a perfect begining. Simply loved it. Bit small but nevertheless awesomly written. Sharon's character was introduced in a fantastic manner. And her cute little antics and bit self centred life style made for an amuisng read. Loved the way you have penned her dialogues in the begining. Coming to the next part of the update I really liked how you dropped the bomb on her. It has quite more or less interesting build up the plot for the coming story. Looking forward to the next update.

thanks for your appreciation...i know the update was a bit small...i will try to give bigger updates from nest time!

Originally posted by: idiot_box

Nish im so glad that you liked it!now whether sharon likes rey or not or does she have any other feeling for him, you will get to know very soon...Swayam's entry is also coming very soon!!and once you come back i need a lamba wala comment to make up for your absence!

sure meri amy!
i wil pakka write a long comment.

Originally posted by: LoveShantannu

It was a perfect beginning for dis ff u described Sharon's character beautifully or I say u did complete justice wid her diva attitude I loved dat part I guess she liked Rey bt be I think swayam d hero is dere for her rescue

Update soon and thanks for d pm

Thank you so much!I guess you guessed it right!😛

Originally posted by: reet_26

perfect start

plz update soon

Thank you so much!will update very soon!

Originally posted by: arjuhiswaron007

Awesome!! btw loved the end... suspense?? Does Sharon love Rey??😳

Update soon!😊

Thank you!!well to know whether Sharon loves Rey or not you will have to wait for the next update.😊

Originally posted by: coolsameera

😊NYC UPDATE . . SHARON LYKEREY AWWW . . ABI TAK SWAYAM SE NI MILI NA ISLYE. .😉

thanks...and I agree with you!😊

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK

Amy nice update and but a bit small. Loving how you are shaping Sharon's character so far and i see poor soul had to already battle the feeling of being lost in love, well i am sure she real soon is to experience the real love in her life. Update soon and thanks for the PM.

thank you Sudha for such a lovely comment!!and i will try to make longer updates from next time!!😊

Originally posted by: shreyasi28

Realy awesum intro for sharon nd grt start for d story too!! Already liking it a lot so plz update d next part soon!!!

Thank you so much!will update soon!!

Originally posted by: troublemagnet

Hey

Great start..:D
update soon..:)

Thank you...will update soon!😊

Originally posted by: beeny

hey Amrita
sry for being soo late
s update is soo sweet i like dat she loves herself & feel spsl & Y yaar shock !!!
rey k sath Kriya hogi tabhi swaron sath honge to waiting for new update
Thanx for PM😃

Thank you beeny!!will update very soon!!