SwaRon FF: Lost in Love - Page 5

Originally posted by: reet_26

nice concept and plz update soon

Hey thanks..will update soon!

Originally posted by: beeny

hey Amrita
soo sweet start
Plz update soon 1st part & don't forget to PM me😃

Thanks Beeny..will update soon and will definitely remember to pm you!!

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK

Amy congrats on this awesome FF dear🤗

I am real sorry for being this late. Loved the start and looking forward to it.

Don't forget to PM me😳

Thank you Sudha..im glad that you are looking forward to it..and don't worry i will not forget to pm you!!:)

thank you all for your comments and likes...they encourage me a lot...so here goes the first part...hope you guys like it!!

Lost In Love

Part 1

"Tring...tring...tring!!"
The alarm clock kept on ringing. Sharon looked at it through her half-closed eyes but for the first time in her life she did not curse it for ringing. after all, today was the day-THE DAY. She woke up from the bed and looked at herself in the mirror as always.
"Sharon Rai Prakash, how on earth do you manage to look perfect all the time, huh?" she said to herself while posing in front of the mirror. yes, she had the most perfect hour-glass figure, the most perfect skin and the most perfect-est beautiful green eyes ever. And the most interesting fact is that she was blessed by nature with all of this. "i am Sharon Rai Prakash, I have to be lucky!" she said. Her eyes suddenly landed on the alarm clock on the bed-side table. It was still ringing. She went up to it and stopped it. She went up to her wardrobe and chose her favourite LBD(little Black Dress, yaar!). "today is a special day. I have to dress specially. Not that I look 'not-so-special" everyday though." it took her almost an hour to dress up.
Her driver was waiting for her outside the house with the car. He opened the door for her. "No driver, I will drive today." she said. "But ma'am, I drive you to college everyday." said the confused driver. Normally, Sharon would have blasted her driver for answering her back but today, she was in a very good mood. "No I will go alone. I am not going to college. I am going to the airport." She replied as she sat on the driver's seat and drove off.

It was one of the happiest days of her life. Her best friend, Rey, was coming back after two long months. They had so much to catch up on. Rey had gone to New York for the summer. Normally wherever Rey was, he would always keep in touch with Sharon no matter what. But this time he had acted very differently. During the first few days, he had kept in touch with Sharon as usual giving her all details about what he was doing and where he was. But then suddenly he stopped calling her and receiving her calls. Sharon was really upset. He was not even replying to her messages and e-mails properly. She had vowed she would not talk to him ever again. Well, it did not matter to her anymore after she received Rey's message last night. It read like this-

"hey Sharon…firstly I am extremely sorry…I have been busy with quite a lot of things so couldn't keep in touch..you will get to know everything when you come to pick me up tomorrow at the airport at 11am,,there is something very interesting waiting for you..Love, Rey."

All her anger melted as soon as she received the message. Her best friend was returning after two months. There must have been a very important reason for not keeping in touch. Now Rey was going to return and he had a surprise for her. She was really excited.

It was sharp 11 o' clock when she reached the airport. Rey will come out any moment. She checked herself out in the rearview mirror as she got down from the car. Where was Rey? If he had asked her to come at 11am, it meant that he would be there at 11am.

Suddenly, she heard a loud sound very near to her ears-"Wooo!!". She immediately closed her eyes and shrieked. She was scared.

"Hahahaha!Sharon yaar! You will always remain a scared dumbo!" a voice said. Sharon opened her eyes and turned around to see her best friend laughing like a maniac.

Sharon: Rey, why do you try to scare me like this all the time?

Rey: I can't help it yaar. Scaring you is the most tempting thing to do. I just can't stop myself from doing it. I love shocking you like this.

Sharon: So this was the interesting that was waiting for me?

Rey: No Sharon. I have to make you meet someone.

He held her shoulders with his hands and turned her around. She saw a beautiful girl in a pink summer dress. She had short hair, black eyes, and an hour-glass figure.

Rey: Sharon, meet Kria-my girlfriend.

As soon as those words slipped out of Rey's lips, Sharon felt her entire world crashing before her. She was dumbstruck. All her senses went numb. She couldn't feel anything. No soumd was entering her ears. Everything in front of her seemed hazy till everything went dark and then totally black. She fainted in Rey's arms.

Well, I know this was a pretty "ainvayi" update…but it was necessary for the introduction of characters and plot. I hope you guys didn't feel it was too bad. Please leave your precious likes and comments. Will try to reply to all the comments!!

And for pms please buddy me up!😊

res unres awesome update amy.. loved it... Sharon heartbroken after knowing bout rey and kria... dat means she likes him.. waiting for swayam's entry.. Thanks for the pm!! P.s:u know i wil be inactive frm 15,so i wil nt be able to cmnt on any further updates..til dec.. bt wil read al of dem and comment,once i wil be back...

hey its a good start

WOW...Awesome intro Amy...loved it ...Loved the way you introduced Sharon's character ...her frame of mind...her confidence ...her feelings..her excitement ...loved her monologue...

"Sharon Rai Prakash, how on earth do you manage to look perfect all the time, huh?"

Thats so much like the sharon we all know...her excitement for meeting Rey ..she is having feelings for him or at least she thinks that way...but he is already in a relationship ...i can sense so many twists and turns in a romantic way of course ...Can't wait for Swayam's entry ...plz plz update soon dear...dont forget to pm me 😊