SwaRon FF: Lost in Love - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
Awesome update amrita! Nw realy cant wait for d next update aftr d precap bt i undrstnd ur prob coz i m too frm kolkata! So enjoy ur puja nd have a safe journey!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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comment edited 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woah this was a captivating update. Sharon's story, her character and her situation has been beautifuly build up. Her point of view was quite interestingly written. And one can easily feel the pain and confusion and jealousy her character is facing. Sharey conversation was just mindblowing. Looking forward to next update. To see the meeting of Kriya and Sharon and most importantly Swayam and Kriya.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update Amy.
Loved the conversation Sharey have and the jealousy Sharon felt and the pain of loosing her love was evident. Now looking forward to read how she falls for Swayam and did Shaorn just think of Swayam as the greek god 😳 It will be fun to read about the encounter of Sharon and Kriya as she is joining them in same college.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This update was an amazing piece of writing
U wrote Sharon's monologue in a quite impressive way
For I moment I thought in her hyper mode she would accept dat she was being jealous of kriya and is in love wid Rey but thank god she didn't spill d beans out I loved how she was being possessive about Rey and I am sure about meeting swayam she would accept dat Rey is just a good friend of her

D promo looked quite promising and so was d CS do update soon and pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So I was right after all wasn't I😆
Great update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Amy...sorry for not commenting before...luvd both ur updates...I really liked the way u started the story...and the Sharey angle...b it friend or luver is sumthing I luv to read...I know this is a Swaron tale ...just that I was impressed the way u put across the sharon POV...do update soon...promising precap
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Amrita,please forgive me for being late at the first place. i was absent for the very first two chapters so am extremely sorry. i read the two updates and the CS in a go. loved the CS and the updates. the cross connection prevailing makes this FF intriguing. the ShaRey bond is good,well hoping for KriYam part to come up soon[KriYam being my fav. apart than SwaRon]. the bond is truly deceptive and also Sharon tends to be impervious. lovely update.

Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This update was awesome i read the previous update as well and it was wonderful... please update the next chapter soon and please PM me when you will update the next chapter.

Hey i have sent you a buddy request please accept it...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you all for your comments and likes..They encourage me a lot and they seriously mean a lot to me... couldn't personally reply to the comments this time but from next time I'll definitely do it!!and sorry for being sooo late! And yes, I want to dedicate this update to all my friends on If- Nish, Dee, Maggie, Pratik, Tanu, Himu, Ananya, Nehal, Aruba, Sudha, Suku and Satnam(please do kill me virtually if I'm missing out someone!)..Happy Diwali people!!so here goes the third part...hope you guys like it!!😊

Lost In Love

Part 3

"Why? Oh! Why? Why did I agree to come for dinner with Rey? I should have guessed that his "girlfriend" Kria would accompany us. I feel like killing her!" Sharon shouted in her mind. She wanted to spend some quality time with Rey, but clearly Rey had other plans for her. He wanted her to meet his girlfriend and wanted the girls to bond together. And in addition to that, to Sharon's great annoyance they had come to dine at 'Grand Chimney', the best Indian restaurant in town.

Sharon (as soon as they were seated at the table): Rey, you know na, I don't like Indian food. I am fond of Chinese, Italian and Thai food. Even you don't like Indian food. So why are we here? We always go to 'Blue Fox', right?

Rey: Kria loves Indian food, Sharon.

Kria: Yeah Sharon. And you know what Rey? Even 'he' loves Indian food!

Sharon: He? Who else is coming?

Rey (teasingly): the guy who picked you up.

Kria: My best friend.

Sharon: But who the hell is he?

Rey: Chill na!

Kria: You will get to know he is here as soon as he enters.

Just then few girls standing near the door almost started shouting- "Oh God! Such a cute guy!", "He is so hot!", "Who is he?"

Kria smiled and said, "He is here". Sharon turned around and then she saw someone entering. He was tall, almost six feet. He had jet black long hair which covered his entire forehead. His eyes were brown, really brown, dark chocolate brown, almost brownie brown. He had sparking, warm brownie brown eyes. He had sharp features and was really well- dressed. He had a well-built, athletic, lean physique. Almost all the girls in the restaurant were in awe of him. They stared at him, as he confidently walked towards their table. As he approached Kria got up and gave him a tight hug. Rey shook hands with him. But Sharon kept sti;; totally awestruck by this Greek God.

Kria: Sharon, meet Swayam, Swayam Shekhawat, my best buddy.

Sharon (somehow managing herself): Hi.

Swayam: Hey.

He smiled at her and took the seat next to her. Sharon just couldn't stop gaping at him.

Swayam: So you fine now Sharon? You didn't seem okay the last time I saw you.

Sharon: When did you see me? (Then remembering whatever had happened at the airport)Oh yeah! I am okay now.

Rey: Sharon, you seem really lost.

Kria: That's okay. Girls often feel lost in Swayam's presence. Nothing new!

Sharon: Excuse me! What do you even mean?

Kria: It's okay Sharon. Swayam's just so perfect that he is just able to sweep any girl off the ground with just a look.

Swayam: Oh come on! You know that's not true Kria. Stop exaggerating.

Kria: Shut up Swayam! I have been your best friend since like forever which is why I know what kind of effect you have on girls. We just kind of got to see a small example of it as you entered.

Rey: Hey but the point is that Sharon is not just "any girl", okay?

Rey's words brought Sharon back to her senses. "Yes Kria, Rey is right. I am not just 'any girl'. I am Sharon Rai Prakash. And you have snatched away 'my guy'!!" she said aloud, adding the last sentence only in her mind. Yes, it was true that like all other girls in the restaurant she too was in awe of Swayam but for her Rey was and always would be the best.

Kria: So what are we waiting for? Now that Swayam is here, let's order.

(rey called the waiter)

Rey: What will you have Kria?

Kria: We are new to this place so why don't you order for us? But please do order Shahi Paneer, Swayam and I love paneer.

Rey: Really? Even I love paneer.

Sharon: Hey wait'Rey you never liked paneer! You hate it!

Rey: I used to hate it, but now I love it because my Kria loves it.

Sharon was shocked. "Is this the same guy I knew two months back? He has changed so much. Why does he need to change himself just because he is with Kria? There is just no need to change because of this stupid girl. I would never have asked you to change, Rey. Why am I tolerating this irritating girl? Oh yes! Because I love Rey and Rey wants me to bond with her!" Sharon said in her mind. She was afraid that she might loose her patience very soon. Suddenly she realized that Swayam was smiling at her. As she looked at him, she found an amused expression on his face. "Why is this guy so amused?" she wondered. He had been quiet since the time he was introduced. " Why does this Swayam guy not speak and why is he so amused? What is wrong with him?" she kept on wondering when she suddenly realized that Rey was talking to her.

Rey: Sharon, we are really sorry but Kria and I have to leave. Kria's mother just called and asked her to pick up a parcel from a friend. It is urgent. We have to go now.

Sharon: But what about dinner? We have ordered for the food Rey.

Kria: Sharon, why don't you stay back with Swayam and have dinner with him?

Rey: Kria, this is a brilliant idea!
Sharon What? Nooo Rey! Drop me home and then go pick up whatever you have to. And anyway why can't Kria go alone?

Rey: Because she is new in the city. I can't leave her alone.

Sharon: So you are going to leave me alone?

Rey: Arrey, Swayam is there na! Swayam won't you have dinner with her and then drop her home?

Swayam: Of course, that would completely be my pleasure.

Rey and Kria did not wait anymore. They rushed out leaving a very annoyed Sharon and a very amused Swayam behind.

Swayam: Hey Sharon, don't worry, It's not going to be as bad as you are thinking, you know.

Sharon: What?

Swayam: I'm saying that having dinner with me is not going to be that bad.

Sharon: How can you be so sure> I still can't believe that Rey left me alone with a guy I don't even know properly.

Swayam: You are not exactly very fond of observing other people, are you?

Sharon: What do you mean?

Swayam: You really think they left because they had something urgent to do?

Sharon: That's what Rey said, remember?

Swayam: You are too stupid. You still haven't realized? Seriously? Don't you realize that was their master plan! They deliberately left because they wanted to set us up on a date!

Hope this update wasn't too bad!! Please do hit the like button and comment!! Next update will come after Page 25!! And Happy Diwali to everyone once again!!😊

Edited by idiot_box - 12 years ago

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