SwaRon FF: Lost in Love

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Nice update Amy...Rey and Kria are quite busy in their own world...Swayam is mature enuf to understand that he has been set up and Sharon is too dazed yet to actually understand what is happening around her...this is gonna b one hell of a ride looks like!!!

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-.Nisha.-

@-.Nisha.-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Amy..my sweetiepie🤗
Missed u...glad to have you back...😃
Awesome update as usual..
...loved it...right from the start
sharon getting irritated cause of kria
..and then enters our hero,a
hunk😳
girls going all gaga over him...not their fault..swayam's charm
sharon awestruck by swayam's godawesome looks😃
and then kria praising swayam ..till swaron were left alone in the hotel on an unexpected date.
swayam understood that kriyansh did all this to set them up on a date..smart he is...😎
but poor sharon,she still don't have any idea about what's going on..😛
eagerly waiting for the next chapter..😃
Update soon..pls😳
Thanks for the pm!!
p.s: Thanks for the dedication dear..Love you❤️

Edited by --NishaGoyal-- - 12 years ago

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reet_26

@reet_26

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Awesome update

waiting for next update

plz update soon

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Snowey

@Snowey

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Really sorry for commenting so late Amy, but you know right was busy with exams.

Coming the update, it was awesome. Its always a pleasure to read about a confused and annoyed Shaorn and an equally amused Swayam. Sharon and her thoughts were beautifully penned i liked how she was doing every bit in her to keep calm. Rey and Kriya setting SwaRon on a date..that seems interesting. Looking forward to the next update not so patiently so please...pretty please update soon...and thanks for the dedication.. *hugs*

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swa-ron

@swa-ron

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#105

nice

pls pm me the next tym u update

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tanuka

@Tanuka_TanHa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#106

AMRITA 🤗

it feels so nice to see u updating after soo long .

Awesome update amu :D

loved it .

will be waiting for the next part , update soon..

thanks for the PM.

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flirteyed

@flirteyed

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Hey amrita wat an wonderful update i must say! I had a big smile n my face aftr i read it! I lovd d end nd d part where u described swayam's eyes as brownie brown :p
I love SwaRon's attitude toward each odr! Itz quite interesting nd it adds a diff flavour to d story as well as it serves a grt plot fr a brilliant story! So hoping u wud update sun coz i wanna read it badly! Plz keep sendin pms :D
Hope u had a grt diwali! Take care :)

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Shishir Darsh

@marauder

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Swayam to pura filmy hero nikala. Handsome as well as sharp observer. After some intense initial updates loved the lighter tone of this update. It was amusing. Sharon's pov was fun to read and even though Swayam had hardly anything ot say or do but still his character made an impact. Looking forward to the net update to see Sharon's reaction.

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Amrita Sengupta

@idiot_box

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
Hey Amy...🤗

You are back with an awesome chapter of this adorable FF of urs...loved this part...Sharon's jealousy...irritation...Kriyansh lost in each other ...loved the way you showed sharon's state of mind...hating kriya as she took the guy she likes...you took my breath away with the grand entrance of Mr Charming Shekhawat...girls drooling over him...whispering about him...hehe...it was awesome...

loved the way u showed sharon's POV...describing HIM:

He was tall, almost six feet. He had jet black long hair which covered his entire forehead. His eyes were brown, really brown, dark chocolate brown, almost brownie brown. He had sparking, warm brownie brown eyes. He had sharp features and was really well- dressed. He had a well-built, athletic, lean physique. Almost all the girls in the restaurant were in awe of him. They stared at him, as he confidently walked towards their table. As he approached Kria got up and gave him a tight hug. Rey shook hands with him. But Sharon kept sti;; totally awestruck by this Greek God.

Sharon's cute nok jhok with Kriya ..and yet stealing glances of swayam was amusing...now that Kriyansh have left them for a date...i can't wait for the next part...plz continue soon...loved this light hearted amusing part...lovely...keep writing dear 😊

PS-Thanx for d dedication swthrt...m touched...😳

Thanks for all those sweet words. Coming from a writer like you, it does mean a lot to me!😃

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Amrita Sengupta

@idiot_box

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: sweetcherry95
short but nice update
think u are in love with swayam's eyes
His eyes were brown, really brown, dark chocolate brown, almost brownie brown. He had sparking, warm brownie brown eyes

read it without pm
update soon

I Am in love with his eyes!! brownie brown eyes!❤️

And thanks a lot for commenting!