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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 4

"AAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" He hears a earsplitting shriek coming from inside the house and from the sound of it, it was Ria. He rushes inside not knowing what he will encounter.

Ria is crouched against the wall and someone is advancing on her as she is crying. Angad pulls him off of her and pins him to the wall seeing that it was unsurprisingly his dad.

"YOU!!! Why have u come here now, why the hell cant u leave us alone."

Dilip simply smiles, "Why else would i come here, i want money."

"You are threatning my little sister for that, u want money right here u can have it." he takes out a bundel from under the desk and puts it in his hand, "and if u ever try to hurt my sister again i swear i will kill i will not even think before doing it. Now get the hell out of here."

The dad leaves stagaring because of excess alcohol. Angad sits besides his sister and hugs her who is still crying.

"Ria why didnt u ask before letting someone in, he could have hurt u."

"I thought it would be you because it was time for u to come back from school."

"Dont cry he won't come back." Angad thinks to himself, "Just wait till i turn 18 Ria i will be free, free, and in full control of my assets, he won't be able to threaten me after that."

"Bhai do u remember mom."

"Ria u know i dont like to talk about her."

"She abandoned us, with this lunitic, i still havent forgoten how many times he beat me and i cant forgive her."

"But bhai she must be help less, I mean seeing dad and how he drinks."

"She was so helpless that she forgot her kids, she left them to rot in this hell.Lets go and eat Ria, whose turn is it to cook."

Ria wasnt distracted, "Bhai where did u get this money from? You dont work or anything. šŸ˜• "

"Oh the money well... i... aaa... earned this money."

"What do u mean."

"Umm... well u know by working."

"How come i dont know where u work."

"Aaa... because... because today was my first day and this was an advance for working there."

"Where do u work?"

"Shalimar Mall"

"Wow isnt that the one that Kripa's dad owns."

"Ya thats the one." He says confidently

"I ll tell Kripa she must know already but if she doesnt it'll be fun to tell her."

"How would she know? its not like she works there or anything."

"Well actually she does work there, šŸ˜† u wont beleive this, she told me not to tell anyone but i ll tell u just dont make fun of her."

"Ok whatever... tell me" He is desperate to know, one because he loves kripa and second because his lie would be revealed if ria talks to Kripa.

"Did u remember that book, she bought for 1 crore. well her dad with prithvi's advice ofcourse, decided to punish her for spending so much money and especially because of staying out late at night for 2 days , he said to her that "you need to learn how money is earned," šŸ˜†so he made her work at the mall, as a manager, she just called me, sounding so miserablešŸ˜† arent u excited, u both together in one big mall."

"umm... ya very excited" His voice sounding as unenthusiastic as possible.

"It will be so romantic both of u working together, u never know bhai when she might fall for u 😳 , i am going to talk to her right now."

"Ria not now dont talk to her just yet... i need to... I want to surprise her, u know it will be so romantic." He gives her a fake grin.

"Ok." She changes the subject, "It's ur turn to cook bhai but since i am so happy today, i will."

Angad sits on the dinning table and thinks, "Oh god what the hell did i just do why did i have to take name of that place where Kripa works, if Ria finds that i dont work there i will be in trouble, i better go apply for a job tommorow." he gives an evil smile "It will be sweet working with Kripa though. šŸ˜‰ "

Edited by munizaaa - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
heheh nice part. so cutee BUT vichari Ria 😭 bad bad Dilip... lol cant imagine kripa as manager woh pagak ho janey gi šŸ˜†
continue soon šŸ‘ šŸ‘

-Ruby
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
to good continue soon and will angad get the job? iam just wondering and PLEASE TELL ME WHAT HAPPENDS NEXT I WANT TO KNOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
nice part!!!
....kripa as a manger..got to see that so
plz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!!! šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey roking prt!!!!! cont sooon, cant wait 4 a-k 2 work with each otha šŸ˜‰ lol

xoxoxo-Hawa 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: soaps_01

nice part!!!
....kripa as a manger..got to see that so
plz cont soon

well yes but i am getting

a feeling that she is not going

to enjoy managing Angad.šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

Edited by munizaaa - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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munizaaaaaaaaaaaaa i just luv ur ff! i am luking forward to kripa's job of managing angad...oops.... i mean kripa's job of manager šŸ˜†
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Posted: 19 years ago
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great part!! it was awesome! Cont. soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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the next part

Part 5

Angad skips college the next day, as he had to go find work in Shalimar mall. Coincidentally Kripa also didn't go to college on her dad's orders of course he told her that she should not go to college that day and understand all the work that she need to manage in the mall, Kripa really didn't want to do it and only agreed cause he threatened to cut off her pocket money. Prithvi was very happy, he knew his sister was unhappy doing work like that but he thought that lesson was a good one for Kripa to learn.

Kripa was roaming around with her supervisor, yes she was working under someone despite the fact that her dad owned the place she was very annoyed by now. "See Mrs. Sharma this is a coffee machine all u have to do is push this button and u can enjoy a hot flavor full coffee."

Kripa answers him back annoyed, "Why would I bother pushing the button when I can just go to Starbucks a few steps from here."

"well this coffee is free, and star bucks coffee cost a lot."

"But my dad owns…" she stops remembering that she had promised her dad not to tell that she was related to him. "Umm… ya its for free, that's great. So am I just going to be drinking coffee or what."

"Oh no we have very important work for u, u will be checking through all the record books and make sure everything is fine, U will have to look for which of the places in the mall are most popular and which are no longer successful so we would know what places we need to replace with newer more popular ones, and then all the people will be working under u, like the janitor, sales clerk, accountant, u got to take care of their needs and wants."

Kripa thinks to herself, "how the hell did I get stuck in this place and I have to work here for a whole month, oh god I am going to DIE." Kripa spots Angad roaming around. "Oh god what the hell is he doing here, my reputation at school is going to go down the drain if he sees me working here."

Angad goes and talks to someone as Kripa hides behind the pillar listening to their conversation, " Hi my name is Angad Khanna. I wanted to apply for a job here."

"Oh ok, can u just sit there I will be right back" The lady says pointing at the seat.

The lady comes out towards Kripa, "U are the new manager right?"

"Ya I am"

"Well this guy wants a job, and since ur the manager its ur job to hire and fire people."

Kripa takes the lady aside, "Umm… if I give u 100,000 rupees will u do the job for me and make sure that he doesn't get the job."

The lady is stunned but know that it was wise to shut her mouth when she is offered so much money. She goes back, "Umm… Mr. Khanna I am sorry but we don't have a job…"

She is cut off as Kripa's dad enters, "Hey Julie (name of the girl) whats going on, I wanted to ask u about our new manag…" seeing Angad he stops. "Oh hi and who is this."

"He is Mr. Khanna he wanted a job her but I told him that we don't have any place available for him."

Deepanker picks up Angad's file and scans through it, "Wow a mechanic, and u know how to fix camera's and machines, very good at calculations I see-- Julie we have a spot available for him he can fix camera's our camera system has a virus for many days and there is equipment that needs repairing, ur hired. The new manager will explain to u ur work she is new too." He call a worker and tells him to take him to Kripa. As Angad leaves, Mr. Sharma start talking to Julie again, "Ok Julie I wanted to talk to u about…" Kripa who is standing outside stamps her feet in anger, "that loser had to come here to find work."

Edited by munizaaa - 19 years ago

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