*ONLY WISH* End or a New begining Pg91 - Page 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
wonderful ff! i luved it. continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
aahhh when are you going to continue i have been waiting for like ever continue!!!!!!to good of a fan fic so continue ppppllllllllleeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssseeee
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
thanks guys for those wonderful comments i will continue in a few minutes. I would have continued but was busy with guest at my house.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
Before I start I will give u guys background information on somethings and people just think of the first 2 parts as intro the real story will start after this.

Angad Khanna: A flirty but very nice guy, he committed a mistake by accident last year for which he feels very guilt and fears that someone or more specifically Kripa will find out about it because he knows that the outcome of her finding out will be horrible.

Dilip Khanna: Drunk violent father most feared by Ria. Angad learned to cope with him long ago but ria, being a girl never could.

Kripa Sharma: Suffered depression for a whole past year due to a very heavy loss, She was very good friends with Angad (even a bit more then a friend) but after that event everything changed, In fact she lost touch of the world after that event, she withdrew to herself. She finds solace only in Angad's books which she loves beyond anything, maybe because she sees herself in it.

Prithvi Sharma: Loves her sister especially after that particular event, It did not effect him as much as it did Kripa maybe because he was away from home studying in USA, but nevertheless it made him very protective of his sister.

Deepankar Sharma: Millionaire, tries very hard not to spoil his daughter but always is unsuccessful.

The book of Angad that just came out "the secrets of the Black City" very popular among teenagers in fact so popular that 99% of the people in his school have read it, all of them are desperately waiting for the next edition, to find out who was the murderer of the main victim.

Josh is the only one that know Angad's secret, that he is the most famous book writer, the only reason he knows is because he is Angad's editor and it would be impossible to hide the secret from him. &a mp;a mp;n bsp;



I know u guys are mad that i couldnt write a part today and just an intro but i will write it in the morning as soon as i wake up,😛 i m feeling very lazy at the moment😳.
Edited by munizaaa - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
awesome!! this is making me more excited!! 😳 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
that was just as amazing as a part 👏 i wanna read so badly now. continue soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
that was great!Plz plz wake up soooooooonnnnnn - is that too selfish? 😳 😆

plz cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#38
hi!
i wanna post a song due to ur fan-fic.
Damn baby
Just don't understand where we went wrong
I gave you my heart
I gave you my soul
I gave you...

As a matter of fact I was the one who said I love you first
It was about eight years ago, don't act like you don't know
We were sittin' at home in your mama's livin' room
Cause, we couldn't be alone
See your mama knew I was something else, she knew how I felt
Back then we were in school; and that's your favourite excuse
Growin' up I was a fool; and I can't lie I'm missing you
Listen and don't trip
I think I need a bottle with a genie in it
Here's my wish list
First one, I would create a heart changing love
Second one, I'll take yours and fill it all the way up
Third one, but I don't need a lot of wishes cause I'll be okay if I get one
If I had one wish, we would be best friends
Love would never end, it would just begin
If I had one wish, you would be my boo
Promise to love you, trust me I'll trust you
If I had one wish, we would run away
Making love all day, have us a baby
If I had one wish, I'd make you my whole life
And you'd be my wife, make it right this time
If I had one wish
One wish, one wish, one wish
One wish, one wish, one wish
One wish, one wish, one wish
One wish, one wish, one wish

Now tell me is this the only way I can get you right back in
If so then searchin' I'll go, then I can have you for sho
Then you'll be loving me, holding me, kissing me
So girl don't tell me what I'm feeling is make believe

I swear if I lose a second chance with you
I wouldn't know what to do
I'd probably check myself into some kind of clinic
I couldn't be alone because without you I'm sick
Here's my wish list
First one, I would create a heart changing love
Second one, I'll take yours and fill it all the way up
Third one, but I don't need a lot of wishes cause I'll be okay if I get one
If I had one wish, we would be best friends
Love would never end, it would just begin
If I had one wish, you would be my boo
Promise to love you, trust me I'll trust you
If I had one wish, we would run away
Making love all day, have us a baby
If I had one wish, I'd make you my whole life
And you'd be my wife, make it right this time
If I had one wish
I don't even know how we ended upon this road
And, even though we are grown, Girl I just want you to know

If I had one wish, we would be best friends
Love would never end, it would just begin
If I had one wish, you would be my boo
Promise to love you, trust me I'll trust you
If I had one wish, we would run away
Making love all day, have us a baby
If I had one wish, I'd make you my whole life
And you'd be my wife, make it right this time

thanx.
bye!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: soaps_01

that was great!Plz plz wake up soooooooonnnnnn - is that too selfish? 😳 😆

plz cont soon

😆😆 i am awake and earlier then usual at 10 that is a great achievement for me. I ll post the next part soon.

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Posted: 19 years ago
#40

Wow that was a totally awesome song i just loveeeeedddd it 👏 👏 👏 .

Heres the next part

Part 3.

Angad is in his English class and Kripa is sitting to the left of him. He is watching her as she flips the pages in her book (hidden under the desk), biting her lower lip. She must be on an exciting part thought Angad. He often thought what would happen if he actually let it reveal that he was Sahil (that's the pen name that he wrote under). It would surprise countless numbers of people, one would of course be Kripa, would she love him then like she loves Sahil, she had went out with him once before, so she had to have some feelings for him, but that was the same day that Harry had died... But he did not want to think about that, because that was the day that he had lost his Kripa. He knew his sister would beat him into a pulp for not telling and then there was his English teacher, god did he hate her or what, and as far as he knew she shared the same feelings for him. He knew that no matter how much time he spent on something he would end up failing it. He knew he wasn't that bad of a writer after all so many of his books had been published, and his past novel had been so popular that it had was the talk of the school right now.

"Mr. Khanna. Mr. Khanna. Mr Khanna!!" Angad jerks as he hears Mrs.J calls out his name, he had been so immersed in his thoughts that he hadn't even noticed that it was his turn to go and present the stupid paper he had worked on while eating his breakfast this morning. He gets up of his chair and starts reading.

"Hey guys my story is about…" He didn't make much of an effort because he knew no one was listening, he knew Kripa was so immersed in her novel that she hadn't even noticed who was up next. When he finished he looked at Mrs. J and saw her mark something on her paper that looked suspiciously like a F, but he didn't care he was already a billionaire with his books and didn't have to worry about failing English.

Three students went after him, but Angad barley noticed he was too busy goggling at Kripa, who seemed in a particularly happy mood today. She was smiling to herself something he hadn't seen since before Harry had died. He was wondering weather he should ask her out, but he was scared, for some reason his appearance always seemed to annoy her, maybe he was just imagining things. He had to give it a try he would never know if he didn't try. But maybe he ll do it tomorrow, for some reason this day didn't seem right to ask her out.

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Angad walks home from school if he wanted he could have bought the most expensive car there was but that would involve questions on where he got it. He reaches his house which was quite small and very worn out.

"AAAAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" He hears a earsplitting shriek coming from inside the house and from the sound of it, it was Ria. He rushes inside not knowing what he will encounter.

Edited by munizaaa - 19 years ago

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