ARSHI SS: ~PAWN cr~ (BFTW3)*IMP NOTE* Pg 141

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hira2050

@hira2050

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

The concept is very different nd seems very interesting...vll love to read more

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Scarlet Wizard

@FromTheAshes

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

awesome story

yr why did u doo this u said u will update it after completing bftw 2 and it will take a lot of time

update soon

al the best for new story

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deepa

@deeswarna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

different but very interesting concept.

so happy u decided to start a season 3.

keep ti up with the good work.

looking forward to reading this ff:)

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

booh...new BFTW 3...cool...

its dark story...n strictly 18+...😆 m 22 so its all ok...

prologue nyc...khushi's mom nasty women...loves younger man...🤣...paro di...its like u love to write younger man wid old lady...is it ur new interest...

it will be more enjoyable to read m sure...

if arnav is khushi's mom's new scapegoat ,...thn her mom fixed her marriage wid arnav...or someone else...as arnav here 30s ...its quite old 27 or 28 perfect...😆...n khushi 18...too young 21 or 22..best fr marriage age...😛...so its 18+10...28 if 10 yrs elder...but 30...its 12 year...its lil 😕...

pililijjj di chapter 1 update soon..m really excited to read more to unfold the ...whole story...

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shivi.10rocks

@shivi.10rocks

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

hey congrats to u n ur princess on new ss ..
again a new cocept n i must say it's really vry dark but i wll read whatever u wll write

wll wait for it

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shilpa09

@shilpa09

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

u r amazing dear:)

awesome concept:)

plzz do continue...i would lyk to read till end:):):)

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nani1222

@nani1222

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

nice one appy...totally different story...go ahed and update soon...

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TabbyJ.

@TabbyJ.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#28

dude who would not want to read this!!!!!
appy this maybe dark or watever u name it, but this piece oh spine shivering writing has surely got me hooked!

btw why do i not get ur pms??? *pouts*

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ruby-red

@ruby-red

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#29

hey appy this concept is brilliant, i cant wait to see what you have in store for us, please please continue this soon, thanx, and a pm will be very appriciated.

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kajolkonna

@kajolkonna

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

Di, don't think me as basher!! I m really a great fan of urs writing. But don't u think it will b little weird that same man having physical relation with both mother and daughter!! But i think u will do justice with all ur stories. And plz don't finish BFTW2 so soon plz.