FF: It's Not Right - Thread 5: Ch 50 - Ch 53

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arhilover55

@arhilover55

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Posted: 13 years ago

#211

nice update.

thanks for the pm.

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bushrayou

@bushrayou

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Posted: 13 years ago

#212

BRILLIANT!! oh god I love it!

Dhruv is amazingly cute!!

and more than that... I think this is their plan! god I love your writing!!! this excites mee!

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Mira

@kyunki_iloveu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#213

ohh no
arnav little joke took on a darker turn..
i hope this doesnt create a mu between them
:)

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--BumbleBee--

@--BumbleBee--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#214

I love Dhruv.

His comparison to ASR. Mini-ASR!!😆

Please update soon..

Thanks for the PM..

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peepli

@peepli

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Posted: 13 years ago

#215

Was that an act or for real??? But still it was so emotional...loving this more and more

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Preeti

@preetihere

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Posted: 13 years ago

#216

I cant beleive u did that to me 😲👏
First u made me grin at Dhruv's mini-businessman act then u made me tear up at his vulnerability and then grin again at Khushi's dramatics ... ppl are thinking i am having violent mood swings !!

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

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Posted: 13 years ago

#217

Brilliant ploy Khushi!!!!

ASR had so expected her top rant and rave and shout and push, but this sad Khushi he hadn't expected.

His plan backfired on him on both sides_____ Di and Nani saw through his ploy and Khushi also didn't react according to what he had imagined.

Now what is he gonna do? He most definitely can't see her thus sad and weepy. Boy Mr. Raizada u are being taken on a ride!!!!

p.s. loved the way Dhruv tried to help Khushi and the way u have chalked out his personality... he is so like ASR and yet he retains something uniquely his too.

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Omoraboti

@Omoraboti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#218

So that's her plan?? 😃 Arnav is soo dead .. he can take anything but her tears. The table has turned, I guess! 😆

I just love Dhruv .. the mini ASR .. that little conversation was so sweet.

Thanks for the PM and will be waiting for the next one. 😊

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multifaceted

@multifaceted

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#219

That was an amazing update...quite unexpected...khushi dhruv scene was written beautifully

can't wait to read more...thanks for the PM

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subiscs

@subiscs

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Posted: 13 years ago

#220

awesome update!!! dhruv is really sweet ya ..wondering what s wrong with Khushi..is that her plan actually??arnav cannot see her cry.!!!will wait for the next update ya😊

Edited by subiscs - 13 years ago