FF: It's Not Right - Thread 5: Ch 50 - Ch 53 - Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago
'I'll give him no fuss' 🤣

Khushi sat down on the bucket, dejected. She had thought Arnav had changed, could he still be so callous? 'I was going to write a suicide note.'🤣 KUSHI'S WATCHING TOO MANY FILMS


'What? Suicide...? No! Isn't that a bit drastic? He didn't say he was going to marry Lavanya just that he wanted someone like her! No Khushiji! I know what he's like; this is all probably just his way of getting you to admit you like him. Come on you can't kill yourself! Please! You don't understand bhai! His parents they...' POOR DRUV KUSHI SERIOUSLY WAS GOING TO KILL HIM WITH THIS NEWS


'Dhruv! Dhruv! Calm down! Please! I'm sorry, that's not what I meant. I'm not going to kill myself, honest!'


'You promise?'


'Dhruv it was only a joke. I was going to... I thought I would write a... Hey Devi Maiyya! How stupid, why don't you ever think about these things Khushi? How could I do that to Arnav? After his Amma and Babuji... I'm such a horrible person.'


'What took you so long?'


'I was just... in the... bathroom.'🤣


'Khushi? Have you... have you been crying?' He tried to hold her chin, tilt her head so she would look at him but she brushed his hand aside and walked past to the living room where she was met by an excited Anjali. GOOD ON U KUSHI


This wasn't what he wanted; this wasn't what he had expected at all! He'd expected Khushi to shout, maybe push him around a little but then she would give in, she'd know he wasn't serious but still fall into his trap.👍🏼


When Di began to describe her ideal sister-in-law he could no longer bear it. 'Khushi, come with me. I want to talk to you,' he commanded. He walked away not waiting for an answer and subsequently missing the excited gleam in Di and Nani's eyes.


Even if she was angry, she should say something to him! She should shout at him, demand to know what he was even thinking of by suggesting getting married to someone else. She shouldn't be quiet, she shouldn't shut him out and she definitely shouldn't be crying! NO KUSHI WON'T SAY ANYTHING SHE'S MADE A PLAN WITH MIGHTY DRUV 😃



'I understand Arnavji. I'll help Anjaliji, I will! We'll find you the... we'll find you the best wife.'🥳WHERE'S DRUV IS HIDING SOMEWHERE & WATCHING THIS ALL CAUSE I AM 🤣


And then with a sob that tore at his heart, she wrenched herself out of his arms and out of the door.👍🏼 ARNAV UR SHERNI IS NOT GIVING IN


Fab 2 updates can we have extra long update


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Posted: 12 years ago
amazing update i love dhruv he so sweet n cute n he wants her to win n arnav plan backfire n looks like khushi has a plan up her sleeves loved the update thanks for the om
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Posted: 12 years ago
AWWW! Arnav! That kind of broke my heart, even though I know she's acting. At least, I think she is. I guess it shows how awesome of a writer you are that I'm not sure. Usually I can predict things in stories since I read so much and it all gets kind of repetitive after a while. Same (or similar) settings, characters, dialogues. Just a slightly different theme. The stories that are awesome are the ones that are totally different. Like yours.

Please continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Khushi is a natural..😆
Cant wait to read what Arnav will do.
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...Dhruv is so sweet...he would be an Ideal devar for his Khushi Bhabhi...Poor Arnav...His plan backfired...He has to pay the price...Thanks for the PM
Edited by bhadraprasad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
what a cliffhanger...A is going to kick himself with coming up this plan...K is ever nautanki; ready for drama, all the time!

Dhruv is already showing sign of the arrogant Raizada blood...love his & K's friendship...cute bhabhi/devar...

-Sona
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its an act isn't it?! Dhruv helped her with it! :D


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Posted: 12 years ago
So this is Dhruv's plan, isn't it? Oh how well he knows his brother! Arnav can't stand Khushi's tears and where he wanted to tease out a response from her, he himself is going to blurt out everythong out of guilt! Lol! I have a feeling that Dhruv has had a talk with Anjali and Nani too!

And Khushi and Dhruv make such a cute Bhabhi-Devar duo! Loved it! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok...new game or new realisation???
Waiting for chapter 52
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Posted: 12 years ago
ooh! she is good in her nautanki! his heart is gonna rend itself to bits

this must be dhruv's planning, of course.

The part where his eyes water at the thought of Arnav's parents was sweet. he cares for arnav even with the family history involved.


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