OS-JAB TAK HAI JAAN!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello people !!
okay here is a warning...
i suck at poetry..but still have tried to come up with this...
i really hope i dont get chappals thrown at me after this...
JAB TAK HAI JAAN

NK went to arnavs room..

he was shocked seeing a lot of paper balls around..

NK "nannav mere bhai ye kya kar rahe ho?"

arnav "NK jao yaha se..mai busy hoon"

NK "busy??tum yaha paper phaad phaad ke phek rahe ho..ye busy hona nahi..pagal hona hota hai.."

arnav "what the?"

NK "ab ye wat the ..wat the chodo..aur mujhe batao kya hua?"

arnav "okay"

flashback of the previous night

arnav "kya hua hai??"

khushi "hum apse boht naraz hain"

arnav "kyun?"

khushi "ap humse pyar hi nahi karte"

arnav "really?"

khushi "haan...ap bas kehte rehte hain ki khushi you are bootiphul par aisa samajhte hi nahi"

arnav "are?"

khushi "ap apko hamare liye ek kavita likhni hogi?"

arnav (shocked) "poem?"

khushi "kavita..hindi me"

arnav "uve got to be kidding me khushi"

khushi "nahi hum mazak nahi kar rahe..."

arnav "khushi please tumhari ye stupid demand mai fulfil nahi kar sakta"

khsuhi "thik hai hum apse bat hi nahi karenge"

she took her pillow and went to the guest room to sleep..

end of flashback..

NK "oohhh!!toh ye bat hai..."

arnav nodded..

NK "koi bat nahi nannav ...mai tumhari help karta hoon"

arnav (surprised) "NK hindi me likhna hai"

NK just turned "okay sorry nannav mere bhai baad me silte hain"

arnav "milte"

but NK was gone..

arnav sat there frustrated thinking what to do...

the whole day had passed with khushi ignoring him...

at night khushi came in their room to take her clothes and change ...

the room was filled with candles...roses...

she was surprised..."arnavji?" she said standing at the door..

arnav was sitting on the recliner..he got up..

arnav "khushi"

khushi "hume pata hai ap kya karne ki koshish kar rahe hain...hum apki koi bat nahi sunne wale"

arnav

Teri in bholi aankhon se,

unme dikhti ye shaitaniyon se,

mohabbat karunga mai...

Jab tak hai jaan...

*****

Mere paas ane se,

tera woh hamesha peeche jana,

nahi bhoolunga mai...

jab tak hai jaan...

*****

Tera mere haathon me haath dena,

mujh pe hamesha vishwas kar lena,

nahi bhoolunga mai...

jab tak hai jaan...

*****

Tere woh ankahe shabd,

unke peeche chupa hua dard,

hamesha samajh loonga mai...

Jab tak hai jaan...

******

Tere bina bitaye hue har pal se,

teri aankhon se girte har aansoo se,

nafrat karunga mai...

Jab tak hai jaan...

******

Teri ek hansi dekh kar,

tere saath taare dekh kar,

ek pal me...

zindagi jee loonga mai

jab tak hai jaan...

*****

Teri har bematlab si zidd ko,

apne kiye gaye har vaade ko,

poora karunga mai...

jab tak hai jaan...

******

i love you khushi..

jab tak hai jaan...

khushi had tears in her eyes...

she ran to arnav and put her arms around him...

arnav "isse zyada hindi mujhe nahi ati" he said with a smile...

khushi "ssshhh"

she kissed him all over his face...his eyes..his cheeks..his nose...and lastly his lips...

khushi "i love you arnavji"

*******

next morning..

khushi after having her bath...came and sat next to arnav who had just got up..

khushi "hum di ko batane ja rae hain ki unka bhai kitna bada chupa rustam hai..

arnav"no khushi tum aisa nahi karogi"
khushi "hum toh ja rae hain"

arnav "okay!ek shart pe"

khushi "kya?"

arnav "uske baad kya hua woh bhi batana padega"

khushi "chee arnavji...hume apse bat hi nahi karni"

arnav "fir se?"

khushi laughed "haan"...

she kissed him on his nose..

and went downstairs..."jaldi neeche aa jaiega"

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so here it is...
please do give ur feedback...
and of course i dont need to add the title has come fom srks upcoming movie jab tak hai jaan!!
and i have made up the poem on those lines...
link to my index
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-aparna- thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG OMG
r u kidding me??
Tu kavita bhi karti hai? Haila chits hidden abitlity aaj pata chali.
Pata hai pehla stanza padhane ke baad maine mera boriya rakh diya aur 2 baar padha :D:D
mast likhi hai totally loved it
seriously
aur kya? Chappal mat marna??
Aap bohot filmy ho 🤣

and yes silte hai??🤣🤣

p.s.-warning dekh ke laga gutter hai;)🤣

my most fav from u:*:*
Edited by aparna5293 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Am nt surprisd u hv written such wndrful lines.
after all u r a hindi teachers daughter.
and SRK fan🤣
Edited by -Neloufer- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aap bohot ''pratibhawan'' hai
🤣google🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
@Aparna-am gud at hindi,bt wats pratibhavan🤣

Aap ke pyaare OS
aapki jaanleva poem
nahi bhulungi main

Jab tak hai jaan -2
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Posted: 12 years ago
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mazaa aa gaya!!! nice os!! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Neloufer-

@Aparna-am gud at hindi,bt wats pratibhavan🤣

Aap ke pyaare OS
aapki jaanleva poem
nahi bhulungi main

Jab tak hai jaan -2


nelou ji pratibhavan means talented
apki chits di ke liye:D:D

*humari ghonton ki ye baaten
apane barun pe fida honna
aapke raat me likhe OS
mere apaka majak udana
nahi bhulungi mai
jab tak hai jaa*

🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
Awesme 👏👏👏
THAt WAS A SUPERB POEM- & U TOLD KI UR NOT GOOD AT THIS??😳

LOVED tHE OS,DUDE👍🏼
Edited by coronapsyche - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
awesomee onee... arnav and poetry 😆😆
thnx 4 pm😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Humhari pagal romantic Khushi kya kya karati hai ASR se 😆😆

But the poem was very very well written... Beautiful words of Love! No wonder Arnavji got so much love in return from Khushi.😉
Wonderful OS dear. Thanks so much for the PM.

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