Arhi SS: Finally Married (Honeymoon): Complete

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mahrusweety

@mahrusweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

👏⭐️👏

such a romantic ,,thrilled and awesome story.

loved reading all parts in one go.

u wrote the story so beautifully and wonderfully that i wish badly that all these things ,honeymoon and shayam part actually showed in drama tooo.

anyways enjoyed reading ur ss a looottt 😃

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canvasdreamz

@canvasdreamz

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

very nyc SS.enjoyed Arshi's romantic hnymun in Paris..all their romcom moments were narrated very beautifully .Akash shud take sum tips from his big brothr 😳 loved the funny convo between Arnv n Khushi in the last part..

''I won't be surprised if humare bache ka pehale shabd '' what the!'' hoga.'' (i won't be surprised if our child's very first words are 'what the') She burst out laughing.

Arnav smiled at her. ''Quite possible'' He thought. ''Devi Maiyya'' bi tho ho sakhtha hai'', (It could be ''devi maiyya'' too, You know.) Arnav teased.

''Woh tho phir bhi theek hai, Arnav ji. Jab thak uske pehle shabd, ''hello hi bye bye' nahi ho ''

liked the much needed closure to the kidnapping track.The prospect of Shyam getting what he deserves without a psychologically induced confession is a great relief (seriously what were the CVs thinking,a creep like him cant ever have the conscience to blurt out the truth in the way they showed)👏

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lara3110

@lara3110

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Read all chapters in one go. Thoroughly enjoyed every bit. It was hillarious, fun, passionate. Almos everything. O ne of the best SS, I have read so far. Great job. Fabulous.

Edited by lara3110 - 11 years ago