Arhi SS: Finally Married (Honeymoon): Complete

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Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: rubysk
awesome update... really clap for u...
i love mausam joke a lot...
nice ...

Thanks dear. Try out my other stories too😊

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Thank you thank you Afya...

Finally i get to read if not see the much awaited honeymoon track.

And in Paris...my favourite and most romantic city in the whole wide world. So have you been to paris or living there cause it is just as beautiful as you described it.

I loved the way you brought out the passion and desire that Arnav has for khushi. And it was *blush* filled experience to read khushi's reaction to the same.

And what was the best thing about the whole story is that you kept the whole Shyam track running parallelly without it taking over the whole stage.

I loved the way you justified and played out Payal and akash as well.

And also i loved the fact that Arnav gave all his time for khushi but at the same time also looked out for his family. But without neglecting his wife...Splendid. 👏

Thank you for writing this and i am so happy to be making this journey with you.

Edited by kondhili - 12 years ago

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Afya

@Afya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: kondhili
Thank you thank you Afya...

Finally i get to read if not see the much awaited honeymoon track.
And in Paris...my favourite and most romantic city in the whole wide world. So have you been to paris or living there cause it is just as beautiful as you described it.

I loved the way you brought out the passion and desire that Arnav has for khushi. And it was *blush* filled experience to read khushi's reaction to the same.

And what was the best thing about the whole story is that you kept the whole Shyam track running parallelly without it taking over the whole stage.
I loved the way you justified and played out Payal and akash as well.

And also i loved the fact that Arnav gave all his time for khushi but at the same time also looked out for his family. But without neglecting his wife...Splendid. 👏

Thank you for writing this and i am so happy to be making this journey with you.

Am happy you liked it, Liza. All these stories from now on (SS/OS) were my attempt at changing my memory of the last few months of the show( after remarriage). I hated the tracks they showed on tv. So, I wrote my own.😛

Paris- I do not live there and never have been there. I would love to visit someday though. My description of the city pretty much comes from research online, memories from movies and novels, french people i have met etc...

To me, Arnav and Khushi are the ultimate passionate couple. Their chemistry is mind blowing. They do everything so passionately...starting from their fights to everything including romance. I am glad you enjoyed their ' passion filled honeymoon.

Shyam wasn't exposed by then on the show. So, I wanted to incorporate that too to keep it real.

Thanks Liza for your kind words. Am happy you are making this journey.

And thanks to Vandana for recommending my stories to her friends.

Edited by Afya - 12 years ago