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Stapleton

@Stapleton

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

nice os.

if u can plz continue...

thanks 4 d pm

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Sarah

@Crazy_1001

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Very nice! LOL you made him sound like a creep! 😆 A hot creep :D

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arnshi

@arnshi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

cute and funny...raizada was mean haha...class wala huh...😆...

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blue_sapphire

@blue_sapphire

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

nice os...they so resemble darcy and lizzy!!

loved it!!

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fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

It was interesting, funny, well-written, nice and an adorable take on PnP. But felt the end was incomplete. Need to know what happens at the mela. Please continue.

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Lovely OS...

Arnav is slowly falling for her n in ever meetings he found out a new thing or will came to know more about her...

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Huh Arnav n his class, nice one khushi!

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MyAnastasia18

@MyAnastasia18

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

I loved it it would be really nice if you continue it

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madhvi

@-madhvi-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

so cute n interesting
this is cheating u shud continue..
i wanna knw wat happens during the mela
u write so well.. continue soon
and also update ur ff/ss
plz plz

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luv_arshi

@luv_arshi

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

it was simple yet amazinngg <3

nd u kiddng me.. U goottaaa continue diz onee.. *peelleeejjj* 😃

i liked hw he first crticises her nd den starts noticing her in each nd evry way... <3
da white saree wid red border..da hawa hawaii outfit..nd den da ek do teen.. *hayee*

haha ending was nice..she ignores to go to da mela shela 😆

awesme work yaar..nd plzzz.. U kinda gav a cliffhanger yaar.. Ek aur part toh banta hai bosss 😉

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