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lakraj80

@lakraj80

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

It's beautiful. Thnks for the pm.

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ArHiLover-x

@ArHiLover-x

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

That was so good

Thanks for the PM ;)

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Sona257

@Sona257

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

U really should continue this.. it was 2 good!!

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Anusree Pradeep

@--sree--

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

It was too good.slowly he is falling for her.pls update soon

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YOUR FACE

@PersieV

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

You are so cute!

This was soo good!

I love the way you twisted them both to fit Darcy - Lizzy style!

Continue please?

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anupama

@ak_maggi

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

ah!! that was good... how his mind registered things step by step... happens quite a bit...d same thing looks so different in love right?...but well also its kinda incomplete...😕

Arshi n no rabba ve... not happening...😛 he he he...

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neena

@shadesofme

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

u are continuing and i know that😆

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

you made me want to go and read jane austen books... *runs off to read... love it!!!

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sj_arhi

@sj_arhi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Ah! This OS just brought back my all time favourite character Mr.Darcy. Each line was beautifully linked with Arnav's views on Khushi. A similar scenario of Arnav first judging Khushi based on preconceived notions and then gradually correcting himself and accepting the fact that he is attracted to her. Please do not leave it here.

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Jalebi Jane

@JalebiJane

Inactive

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#60

I'm appalled that you characterize this as lame. I think it is perhaps one of the most delightful pieces you have shared with us. And, I'm not simply saying that because of the nod to Jane.

maya

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