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Posted: 12 years ago

#541

Naina you are a genius 👏 👏

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segad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#542

you are doing this at work? Hope your rakshas does not mind.

another solid chapter retaining the original characters yet showing incremental growth. Loved all of it. Nani, Khushi and Arnav. I think I know why this Khushi appeals to me more than the actual show. She is mature, learns from her experiences and is unafraid to try.

Arnav has always been my favorite, I will confess. But your Arnav is one of the top characterisations of Arnav that I have seen or read

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Posted: 12 years ago

#543

The REAL feel of this story is phenomenal...please don't ever loose it!!👏

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Fatemah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#544

I am loving this :) love arnavs battles with himself :)

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rimu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#545

ch 46

so luvd dis ch...

so open naniji...

khushi defending arnav...

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rimu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#546

ch 47...

amazing update..

they both understand each other so welll...

update soon...

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henamani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#547

lovely as usual naina

i agree with u

any update on this wonderful piece seems short

but i love arnav struggling with his beliefs and khushi surmounting all the hurdles that he has placed around himself to protect.

she trusts him

i wish someday he will reciprocate too

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vittoriA Giardano

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Posted: 12 years ago

#548

That was a great update.

Loved how Nani and Kushi bonded over their love for Arnav. Oh Arnav has his work cut out for him, eh? His inner demons (created by himself albeit due to his circumstances) are really rearing their ugly heads now. Poor Arnav, how will he handle wanting and needing her but not giving her what she wants and needs! And her trust in him. Oo la la! I hope he doesn't break it off, just because he doesn't believe in the M-word!

I love that you have no outside influences in this FF. The turmoil that comes from within is so much more intensifying in this story. And so much more realistic.

Just loved the ending! I love your Kushi. She gives as good as she gets. She's strong, brave, courageous and she has a sense of humour!! Haha! Your virtue is safe with me! Haha!

Of course, the fundamental personality of Kushi that you have left the same is her infinite capacity of goodness - she's still praying for him in these trying times for her!

This is a great FF! The way you have penned your ideas and thoughts is amazing. Thank-you so much for letting me read your work. I truly appreciate it. Thanks for taking the time, too, to PM me.

I just love reading your FF.👏👏👏

Cannot wait for the next update. And you're absolutely correct in saying that however long the update, it's never going to be enough!!!😃