ARHI FF: MasterClass: part51 @ new thread see link - Page 53

Originally posted by: blablabla_mo7

Superb update, thanks for the extended length.
Nani-Khushi's conversation was beautifully written, Khushi being herself is truly a perfect marriage material (typical to nani's liking). Very well portrayed.
Arnav's emotional turmoil with Khushi knowing despite no words spoken shows the understanding she has abt him and their relationship.
I must say I really like your Khushi here. Intelligent, grounded yet bold. It's not easy for one to commit into a relationship which has unknown destiny. It could either be a "happily ever after" or totally broken when one is still unwilling to commit.
Love makes a relationship but I truly believe that it's also the commitment that keeps it going. Excited to know Arnav-Khushis upcoming challenges in keeping their bond going. Hope you'll rock just as how you did so far.

Originally posted by: arnavbarun

it was beautifully written!!!

the best part about your writing is that its crystal clear...you can feel the emotions as if you are going through them!!! not trying to create unnecessary suspense or drama...its beauty lies in the flow of emotions !!! thank you so much for this awesome compliment!! 🤗

its wonderful to see to people in love transforming and evolving for the one they love

Originally posted by: shagun-rocks

oh what a lovely chapter!..started on a sober note & ended on a high-octane passionate one!..this is a hell of a ride that these two have embarked on & i am loving every bit of it!...khushi's last sentence surprised me as well- this girl has indeed come a long way, she's sexually flirting with her man!..☺️..on a more serious note, i so want arnav to realize the importance of an institution called marriage.. You and me both!! For such a smart man, he can be incredibly obtuse at times!!

.he knows he can't so without khushi, so it's time he lets go of his sordid ideas regarding the former & start a new life.. again I couldn't agree more - but perhaps this is where Ms Gupta might com in handy!!

.i am dying to what arnav's response to khushi's flirtation would be, so update soon...& thanks for the pm...

Originally posted by: ASRandKKGSRFan

Hey!

Amazing! Beautiful! Crazy (but a good crazy that is) 😉 ... ahhh ... what more can I say.

The more I read, I can't help wanting to continue ... Ah well why wouldn't I anyway. This has been a great story right from the word go and I'm still loving it 😃.

Please PM me the next update. Thanks!