FF: Arshi: 101 letters(22 Dec thread2 pg158)

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inajnar

@inajnar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#601

Originally posted by: smitzy

thanks dear :)

I use photoshop for the images 😉

Awesome !!

Let me tell you that effort you put in there makes this more beautiful and realistic...

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Devika

@WaterIce

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Posted: 12 years ago

#602

i can't tell you how much i love reading this FF

The story, the dialogues and the letters are just too beautiful.

The letters especially are totally amazing..👏

cant wait to read more

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RandomGirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#603

awesome..superb update..

Arnav's letter was so emotional...

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meradil

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Posted: 12 years ago

#604

i loved the last part of the letter and how khushi herself acknowledged that she may be the reason for arnav's khushi

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JnJ....resh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#605

No words read all in one go just speechless the emotions of A n the way Jalebi's letter solves his unask problem is mindblowing...U really doing a supereb work...Loved every bit of it:)

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Jeevanti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#606

Very nice. Loved your update. 👏

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Uthra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#607

I appreciate how careful you have been with even small details like smudging Arnav's letter here and there.

It is only natural for Arnav to be so cynical. Khushi rightly understood that he is opening up to her only because of the anonymity. I cant help admiring this innocent teenager who wants to fill the life of a stranger with happiness and optimism. Jalebi can make anyone happy. How true.

You may call me filmy, but with every letter I am only imagining a grown up Khushi working for a self made Arnav and fighting with each other without knowing that they are Jalebi and A who mean the world to each other.

I am eagerly awaiting Jalebi letter that is going to change A's life for good.

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VasantiLad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#608

This chapter was so sad - it really moved me- Khushi the saviour - I like the pun with her name - Jalebi -makes it ALL RIGHT - brings the smile to everyone-- this could not be far from the truth in this case- the second of your stories that i follow avidly

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#609

Another beautiful update smitzy. Arnav finally shared his grief with Khushi.
last part of Jalebi bringing happiness was awesome. Looking forward what Khushi replies.

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Msserialfan123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#610

This is a really touching and novel way of writing Arnav and Khushi's tale. The images of an actual letter making it seem even more real and true to life.

I read your other 2 stories as well The Alternate Universe of IPKKND and Taming the angry young man. Eagerly awaiting updates on these wonderful stories too!

You write very emotionally and the lines feel as if they were indeed spoken by Arnav and Khushi. That's an amazing skill. Keep up the good work!

I tried to follow your work on the blog but the link doesn't seem to work.Do you regularly post updates on IF too?