FF: Arshi: 101 letters(22 Dec thread2 pg158)

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Natasha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

fabulous update thanks for the pm

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MithilaTorr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

beautiful !can't seem to wait to see how Arshi meet

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vandana.sagar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Fatanstic...it's been a while since you update...loved it, thanks for the pm

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Nazibah

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Aww...this was an adorable update! I kept checking to see if it was updated!!! Thanks for the PM!!

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smitzy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: ipkkndfanforeva
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Finally u updated!! :D
Been waiting for a while now!

It was a really sweet update!
Arnav is almost the same as he is now. Egoistic, rude, the temper.
I actually imagined that some of these characterstics came out after the death of his parents but mayb the the death actually made it all more intense

Its a bit hard to imagine Arnav pulling pranks u knw!😛
But i loved how you described the bond between bro-sis.<3
LOL..didnt know he cared so much abt his hairstyle!

And i also loved the small scene between Ma-Anjali.
How a small smile played on his lips when he saw the two most imp ppl in his life smiling and laughing away and how in the next moment he felt vulnerable.

Gupta parivaar ke baareun mein kya boloon yaar...its like a very tightly knitted happy family! :)

PS - As this is going to be Arnav centric, Smita nd I are going to have a one hell of a time ;)

hahahaha I thought you'd say the PS comment :P Do I know you well or what!

Yaar, we have no way of knowing what Arnav was like as a kid, so I have all the creative liberties at hand muhahahaha so ya, Arnav as a kid was a prankster, conscious about his hair and appearance, chased after girls (like all teenaged boys do) and actually fought with his sister. All this needed to be built up to make sense about the excerpt I wrote earlier and you'll see how as the story builds up

cheers darling! next update won't take too long! 😊

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smitzy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: segad
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will not hide my glee at the fact that this will be Arnav cenric 🥳

not too many writers do that. Uparse aapke haton mein to jadu hain. so arnav babuwa is in good hands here.

Didn't find arnav egoistic unlike responder no.1😛

very caring brother wants everything to be perfect for dear Di.

Khushi wants to be a chef. hope she fulfills her dream. it is one of my dreams too.

Hi Seema.. ya you're glad too this being Arnav centric eh hahaha I'm glad 😊 yes Arnav is a doting brother who wants everything perfect.. even I was surprised with Shwetha's egoistic comment.. Am i displaying his ego in this? I thought he was just being rude to the workers as they weren't following his instructions.. hmph

cheers!

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smitzy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: fairy_stardust
Lovely, you updated! 🥳
Arnav at 14 still has that egoistic and demanding attitude...the way he told the workers off I was wait, isn't he just a teenager?! 😆 The bro-sis pranks at each other was hilarious...baal kharab kerney ke liye itni baari saza dee behan ko...eww I hate bugs, plastic or real!
Awww, he will miss his di. I am intrigued about what his mother spoke with his sister when giving the kangan,...bidaai talk😭

Khushi, khushi...abhi see chef key sapney...so cute! Brilliant teasing my the parental about the in-laws. Btw, I thought she'd somehow be interested in writing or literature given she was head captain in school. Waise uss ka kia huya? It will be included, yes? 👍🏼

Awaiting next updatewa!

hey Khadija!

Arnav is a cutie pie as a teenage but yes, he was already on his way to becoming strict and no-nonsense from that age itself. He fought with Anjali the same way other siblings did.. ya he is going to miss his sister... Mother-daughter bidai talk yaar

Khushi well.. at that age she wanted to be a chef.. won't say no more coz I don't want the further plot to be given away right now 😊

next update will be soon!

cheers!

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smitzy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: Punkin22
I caught up on this one Smitzy, was behind and missed a couple. This story is stunning. Reading Arnav and Khushi's childhood was brilliant, loved that. Please update soon...

thanks punkin.. I'm glad you're liking it! 😊