Love to hate each other ff chap 28 pg 127 new

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Nimrit

@arna753

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Posted: 12 years ago

#521

awesum chapter andy..

i'm really glad that manyata got her punished.. she deserves it.. feeling bad for uday.

waiting for the next chapter.

thank for the pm..

~Nimrit~

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MAHIMA

@MAHI1198

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Posted: 12 years ago

#522

awesome update Andy...
loved it loads.
poor manyata shez already suffering so much...
god knows wat UV will do... update soon

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annesha kapoor

@_Annesha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#523

it was truly awesome
hahahhaha loved manyata condition
she deserve much more harshness
but yea jai also need to be punished
awnn poor uday is still sick
but happy he is fine now
i m sure his heart gonna break more
when he comes to know
about his real parents
and the fact that he is adopted
thanks for pm
update asap

Edited by annabh - 12 years ago

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Safia Rafiq

@safia25

Explorer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#524

Superb update..
But yeah it was indeed really short.. But still i know even i write stories on IF and this only we writers know that how hard is it to deal a big update .. We have to make good heart touching dialogues and script too to enhance our update..
So basically wonderful update..!!
Update soon..

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kritika

@-Kritika-

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#525

i loved it ... how cute firstly mai manyta ko chate marna chati hu kamini kahi ki ... bechara uday ... but ab mujhe uske liye bura bhi lag rha hai ...vo bhoth sorry feel kar rhi hai n i m feel really bad for her ... but still uday wapis aa gaya apni family ke pass or j kamini mare kahi jake ... haa nhi tho i hope uday manyta ko maaf kar de uski mistake ke liye !!! nice story lovely update ... pm me soon n thanx for pm !!!

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Humairaa

@humairaa1

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#526

Awesome update
Loved it
Shame, really feel bad for Uday n Manyata
J is soo mean
Thanks for the pm 😊

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sonu/ sonali

@preya_radev

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#527

awesome really loved it i hope udays baba tells uday about his real identity soon... but kind of feel sorry for manyata right now... j and her games... udays wants to take revange from manyata for all the pain she caused hi... looks like it's manyata turn now... please update the next part soon and thanks for the [m

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NAVINA

@HunsraJ

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#528

Hi Andy 😊. Fabulous update 👏. Enjoyed it immensely😳! The start was great in that Manyata has realised her fault and she is punishing herself for it. Obviously Uday will do more damage to her later ... 😉 ... BTW - I can't wait for that , start it soon😈. Loved the way Giriraj spoke to Manyata ... he was not OVER THE TOP , he "respectfully" kicked her out of the hospital. The coldness of his tone and voice was very well described👍🏼. I felt so bad for Uday's Baba 😔 ... He was good hearted , gentle soul who loves Uday as if he were his own. I want him to still be a part of uday's life. I don't want him to be alone 😭. He's so afraid that Uday will hate him for keeping the truth from him ... but I'm sure Uday will NOT feel like that. Jai is as usual a manipulating bi**h 🤬 ... within a second , she changed her strategy and is already dreaming of being Uday's wife😡. I hope you're not going to let that happen Andy? There'll be trouble if YOU do 😈.

U know ... the other day , I met our supervisors husband - and his name was Arvind. Automatically , I started thinking about your character . BTW - what happened to him? (NOT THAT I'M MISSING HIM😆)

Lastly ... I love whenever Avantika enters the scene. She has a lovable aura about her. I hope u show a lot of mother-son scenes in future. I find it really heart-warming.

Awesome job with the chapter Andy,

Truly loved it ...

(although ... I was afraid to read it at first😆)

[ - in fact , u must've noticed that on ALL YOUR UPDATES, I'm 1 of the last people to read ... that's because I fright to read them. U always tinge them with a streak of evilness , and that scares me😕].

I think I bored u enough now ,

gotta go ...😳

continue soon,

.. thanx 4 the PM😊.

Bye now 🤗