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TINA...tht was an awesome update...right from the wedding night and thru the mystery person sleepin with shyam...wow...what a transformation... brilliant is all i can say in one word...

Ohhh myyy I hope not...plsss update soon

Originally posted by: smdosi

Awww that ws an awsum update...loved it...too
good..jus wow i wud say...but the end ws like hell shocking!!...i was stunned for sumtime...i started recallin all the moments wer payal ws involved and i still cnt believe that it can b payal...bt still one thing is sure that shez sleeping around with shyam that disgusting pervert! N aftr readin todays update i feel she is no less than a pro******e!!!! Sleepin around with her brother in law wen shez married! Bloody wh**e!!!!!

Awsummm
I neva xpctd diz much of surprise
It was fab
Luvd itt
I always adore yr updates
Gr8 job

Originally posted by: rashgirl000

first i want to give you a very big 🤗

you are AMAZING.👏

the suhaag raat was freaking awesome, intense and much more

i feel breathless after reading the first night scene. too good.

and next WHAT THE the woman is payal? ewww payal is sleeping with the creepwa.

i repeat again WHAT THE??!!!!!

wow the plot is surely getting interesting.

and you said the woman in gown. but i remember payal was wearing a sari.

and why would she bring a spare sari to a gala.

what would be the need. that still sounds fishy to me

or am i imagining things.

and i cant wait for the next part.

and YAY you are going to unmask the figure. cool

i still think anjali, or nathasha. but i never considered akash into this equation its quite possible.

enough of my ranting. am getting impatient.

pls update soon. once again awesome update.👍🏼

Amazing chapter!
It so passionate and thrilling!!
My bets are still on Natasha, that chick is crazy!!
!

can't belive that payal was sleeping with shyam still can't belive it that she can do this

why she had married to akash and ruined that poor guy life

todays updt was awesome and hot

really pyal is the woman ho wants to kill khushi

Originally posted by: AngelTeen

You are brilliant with the suspense bit! I suspected the woman to be Payal from how shocked Aman was...

And coming to the love making part, very elegantly done. Sensuous but not at all cheap.

Good job! :)

Originally posted by: vasuki

TINA...tht was an awesome update...right from the wedding night and thru the mystery person sleepin with shyam...wow...what a transformation... brilliant is all i can say in one word...

my heart was beating rapidly thru out the chapter...and is beating rapidly now too..as i type these wods... finally u r going to reveal the figure...

will be waiting... :) again...wonderful piece of work :)

Originally posted by: -Sparsh-

Awsummm
I neva xpctd diz much of surprise
It was fab
Luvd itt
I always adore yr updates
Gr8 job