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Originally posted by: kvarsha

awesome updateee...

aww soo hawwttt☺️..

oh no wt the it was payall😲...

payal and shyam making outt 🤢

oo god i cat really guess who is tht female😡

updateson

thnx 4 pm😃

Originally posted by: Vicks

Hey - I am new to this FF. But I read all the 30 chapters in one go in the last 1 hour.
I suspect Dia...

Her husband is mentioned as being an womaniser...That being the case, she is looking at Khushi as someone who stole Arnav from either her or her sister...Not sure...

But I suspect that Dia is the one who is behind Khushi!!!

Very well written FF and you should write crime novels...I have read a fair share of such novels, but this FF of yours rank right on the top of my list of favorite thrillers!!!


You go gal!!! I am so extremely impressed with your writing :)

-Vicks...

Omg the ending was more exiting than the update eww why payal why no I don't think it's payal definatley Natasha or her sister

wow Tina, that was awesome...

Awww that ws an awsum update...loved it...too
good..jus wow i wud say...but the end ws like hell shocking!!...i was stunned for sumtime...i started recallin all the moments wer payal ws involved and i still cnt believe that it can b payal...bt still one thing is sure that shez sleeping around with shyam that disgusting pervert! N aftr readin todays update i feel she is no less than a pro******e!!!! Sleepin around with her brother in law wen shez married! Bloody wh**e!!!!!

Originally posted by: Ritwikaparida

Great update...
Dat "jiji" escaped frm khusi's mouth made me drown in shock...omg.. how can it b payal???
Am already goin crazy... So in d nxt part u ll reveal the figure...ri8 na??
Den plz plz pretty plz...wid a cherry on the top...plz update soon...
Waitng...

Originally posted by: farheen75

OMG Payal what a twist Tina!!! I didn't even in my wildest imagination have thought that it could be Payal... So she was in the sack with Shyam ewww... Of all the people Shyam eww again... Yaar u r a master story teller and u r just amazing.

After such a splendid night what a rude awakening for Khushi and Arnav would die of heart attack that his brother's wife is involved with his sister's hubby... I don't know why but I think Akash and Natasha r in it together... Arnav and Khushi should run away somewhere poor souls... Now I really really can't wait for the next part so plz be a sweetheart and update the next part at your earliest convenience.

Originally posted by: TINA!

yes, figure will be revealed next chapter😊. not sure what will be updated next, MG or shameless😉

den update both...hahaha *am being very greedy nw*
but i love both the stories...n ofcrse i love u
-riti-

first i want to give you a very big 🤗

You are brilliant with the suspense bit! I suspected the woman to be Payal from how shocked Aman was...

And coming to the love making part, very elegantly done. Sensuous but not at all cheap.

Good job! :)