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summaiya

@summaiyasayed

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#181

updt soon

luvd it

thanks for pm

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Arooba

@arooba55

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#182

Omg the figure's daydream, that was super scary! I don't want that to happen! Anyways update soon, cuz omg at the precap lol! :)

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#183

MMMUUUAAAHHHUAAAHHH!

THANK_YOU!!!

Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!!

Loved the precap, too!

And thank-you, thank-you, thank-you for having them have their wedding night at their own house. That is if there are no more obstacles!! (For a minute, as I was reading, you had me there!)

Also thought it was the end - thrice!!! You really are a very good writer!

I really hope they can make it and have their SR. I can't wait for it!! (Heehee!)

I was wondering how Arnav could leave her alone - but then he had told the detectives to shadow her. Clever! I was feeling sooo mad at him in the last chapter. I take all that back, now. He really does care, genuinely care about her. I see that now, from his actions. You have made me fall in love with your hero!!!

You really have thought about everything. Like a good writer should. Hmmm... Entice your readers, make them get into the skin of the protagonists, have them think it's the beginning of the end, and then voila! present a solution to the problem. Bravo! I am really in love with your Shameless FF and (after reading your note,) if you ever stop, I'll die!! (I'm not joking!!)

Cannot wait for the next update, as you already know, and OK, OK, I will stop pestering you!!

Awaiting with bated breath for the next chapter!😃

From Vittoria, your #1 Fan

Edited by kbtr - 12 years ago

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tina

@cpervaiz

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#184

such a power pact and full of action update

i mean, it was just so close for arhi to be caught

anjali gives me shivers man, she's so deranged and shyam is still a pervert

hopfully tthey can at least have their wedding night in peace

can't wait to read more

thanx for the pm:)

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Tina

@TinaEskay

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#185

Originally posted by: asdfjkl
great update!

You really had me panicked before mentioning that the figure was daydreaming!

It was thrilling to see if they were going to escape or not. such an amazing story and great update

can't wait for the next one ;)

yeah this chapter was i think a true romantic thriller..

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Tina

@TinaEskay

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: extremelicious
Omg the figure's daydream, that was super scary! I don't want that to happen! Anyways update soon, cuz omg at the precap lol! :)

no worries, khushi is safe..and yes, the precap☺️

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Ruki.F

@Ruki.F

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#187

Even Akash name was there ..why him ..Anjil and Raina s has rezone but wut about him ...

anyway ..wut happen to the venom in her system .. is that gone affect her !!

waiting for next cptr .. hope they really gone have some romance which they dream about it .. thanx for pm darling

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GoldenEyes

@GoldenEyes

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#188

uff the curiosity is killing me! i so wanna know who the person is!

but coming back to the update, omg anjali! is she seriously real?! someone need to lock her up! and her good for nothing husband!

glad arnav and khushi make it out safely!

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Tina

@TinaEskay

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: kbtr
MMMUUUAAAHHHUAAAHHH!

THANK_YOU!!!

Loved it! Loved it! Loved it!!
Loved the precap, too!
And thank-you, thank-you, thank-you for having them have their wedding night at their own house. That is if there are no more obstacles!! (For a minute, as I was reading, you had me there!)
Also thought it was the end - thrice!!! You really are a very good writer!
I really hope they can make it and have their SR. I can't wait for it!! (Heehee!)
I was wondering how Arnav could leave her alone - but then he had told the detectives to shadow her. Clever! I was feeling sooo mad at him in the last chapter. I take all that back, now. He really does care, genuinely care about her. I see that now, from his actions. You have made me fall in love with your hero!!!
You really have thought about everything. Like a good writer should. Hmmm... Entice your readers, make them get into the skin of the protagonists, have them think it's the beginning of the end, and then voila! present a solution to the problem. Bravo! I am really in love with your Shameless FF and (after reading your note,) if you ever stop, I'll die!! (I'm not joking!!)
Cannot wait for the next update, as you already know, and OK, OK, I will stop pestering you!!
Awaiting with bated breath for the next chapter!😃

From Vittoria, your #1 Fan

thanks Vittoria for the wonderful feedback!!😊 see, arnav did pull through after all! he loves khushi just as genuinely and deeply as she does. they're a perfect pair in all the important ways, its just that they're surrounded in chaos and danger. and no worries, shameless will end as it was meant to, it will just take a little longer now. i love this story so much, i wouldn't ever just leave it😳

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Tina

@TinaEskay

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: cpervaiz
such a power pact and full of action update
i mean, it was just so close for arhi to be caught
anjali gives me shivers man, she's so deranged and shyam is still a pervert
hopfully tthey can at least have their wedding night in peace
can't wait to read more
thanx for the pm:)

agree, anjali is very sick . glad u liked the update!

Edited by TINA! - 12 years ago