SS: Of Lemons & Limes # 1 (Chapter 1 - 6) - Page 63

that was so cute and entertaining esp the last line! His lemon? In more ways than one! Completely his undoing...

i was checking every few hrs for update..this story holds my SPECIAL interest 😆😆😆

Brilliant update...who ever thought The Great ASR will dress up to impress a girl??? im soo curious to knw wt will happen in the meeting??continue soon..im commenting b4 getting the pm...i cldn't wait ...thanx Hun again for the wonderful update😊...

Thanks Farah! Hun I needed this after yesterday's episode...atleast somewhere Arnav and Khushi are acting like the old IPK Arnav and Khushi. 😉 I can feel the crackling awareness between then ..thanks to your description.

Love your writing as always! btw when are you updating Desire?

Originally posted by: peepli

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Fab update..

Khushi s reactions are typical of a girl having a huge crush..you have written those emotions wonderfully well..arnav, having insomnia and anjali s pampering seemed like a typical raizada house situation..arnav khushi convo was hilarious, khushi s reaction perfectly in character..finally she got into his car..lol..his obsession with her lemony smell is a very refreshing concept..

But you stole the show with the last line.. Waiting eagerly for the next update, and hope we get hear his thoughts too, as our sanka devi has let her hair down today..

Thank you so much for the comment!! 🤗 I have tried to get into Khushi as much as possible. We will be seeing more of Arnav in the next chapter since he knows what he wants but is yet far from digging into the whys! 😊 Also more on loose hair in the next chapter ..😆

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Originally posted by: DMGFan-2b-not2b

that was so cute and entertaining esp the last line! His lemon? In more ways than one! Completely his undoing...

Yeap!! His Lemon in more than many ways .. 😊 Hope he realizes that soon too!

Thank you so much for the comment. 🤗

Originally posted by: harinderparmar

i was checking every few hrs for update..this story holds my SPECIAL interest😆😆😆

the effects of pheromones are likely to cause some excitement in the story, waiting in anticipation :)

Special pheromonal interest?? 😆😆 LOL .. More on that are coming soon! Hold on!! 😆

Thank you so much for making this story special! 🤗

"His lemon is back" 😃 OMG that was "wow" loved it. Beautiful line. 😊

Originally posted by: annab

Brilliant update...who ever thought The Great ASR will dress up to impress a girl??? im soo curious to knw wt will happen in the meeting??continue soon..im commenting b4 getting the pm...i cldn't wait ...thanx Hun again for the wonderful update😊...

LOL .. Yeah! He has worn the bests he had .. Not that he needed really!

I am really flattered that you guys checked on my story even though I havent sent any PM! Thank you so much! 🤗