SS: Of Lemons & Limes # 1 (Chapter 1 - 6)

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nimra21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#601

Read all the four chapters in one go. Loved it! Different concept which is being executed brilliantly. :)

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#602

Girls! You are amazing! 🤗

Thank you so much for all the love .. I hope to make the next chapter up by Friday. 😊

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Omoraboti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#603

Originally posted by: HK90

beautiful, fantastic, amazing👏 👏 👏

the whole story till now is wonderful, I have no words.

I re-read the last 3 chapters for the second time because the last time I had read so fast that I did not have time to realize exactly what was going on between them, and now that I have re-read, I'm glad, that I did the story is really intriguing. The thing that I like most of all is the fact that you mentioned what Maya Devi think about hem, and what she has in store for this tow.

Love these two sentences:

"You better read the weather forecast first before you pick a dress," she advised herself.🤣

Devi Maiya sighed. This was not enough progress. These two were impossible. One month of morning time together and they were still stuck almost where they started. It was time she intervened again 🤣 🤣 yes, it's right,they need help, but a strong a stong one, I sympathize for Devy Maya, I would not be in his place, guys it isn't easy to control a bomb that could espode at any time (Arnav), and what about the fuljari that sometimes turns off and sometimes does so many sparks
(Khushi).

You know, is not advised to keep the fire near the dynamite, because there is a risk that they do boom😆

I love that Khushi is giving Arnav harsh treatment, after what he said he little bit deserve it😃. But at the same time I feel sorry for him😔, in short, he is going crazy with this "sir", the failure to give more lifts, not to smell her perfume poor Arnav.

Continue soon, thanks for the PMS and this awesome and interestig story🤗

Hi Preet!

Thank you so much for the generous comment! 🤗

The inclusion of Devi Maiya was just spontaneous. I am happy that you and others are liking it. It is really difficult to keep these two in harmony .. and they are really tube lights!!! 😆😆 Since I am not willing to make this story big, the realization will not take very long but still they will need some pushes from Devi Maiya. 😊

Thanks once again!

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anjs

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Posted: 12 years ago

#604

lovely...eagerly waiting for friday now :)

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Parsha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#605

oh my brilliant darling..i m tired of checking my inbox..pls update...this one stayed with me..n m thinking about it...and air around has started smelling like lime...👏👏👏!!!

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zooni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#606

Originally posted by: Omoraboti
Girls! You are amazing! 🤗

Thank you so much for all the love .. I hope to make the next chapter up by Friday. 😊

waiting for friday 😃

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shalinii173

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Posted: 12 years ago

#607

i just found ur ss. that was so lovely. beautifully written. loved it. waiting for the next update. continue soon.😊

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Preet

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: zooni.blue

waiting for friday 😃

Waiting that friday come fast. And I'm happy that you liked my comment, it was spontaneous, I simply wrote what i feel reading the updates, and belive me the story is really great, awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Continue soon.

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_G1234_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#609

wonderful update..i just love khushi's nakra's.. :P i mean the way she annoy him and avoid him in office...bechara arnav. khushi is making him crazy by her lemony smell.. arnav is very much addicted to her... loved arnav POV.. sorry for commenting late... it was awesomeee update... very well written. update soon.. :)