SS: Of Lemons & Limes # 1 (Chapter 1 - 6)

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Posted: 12 years ago

#591

amazing simply superb

i love the way arnav is getting frustrated

continue soon

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#592

wow this guy sure is confusing her
dude you have gotten addicted to her and you dont know why that is
bechare arnie well so far its been his pov now we will know how khushi was faring
well he still didnt get it why he is so attuened to her
why he craves for her attention on him and not being so cold and distant from him
really pity this man but with things he keep doing its all his fault anyway

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Ajita Spencer

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Posted: 12 years ago

#593

I was so happy reading this update ...She is giving him the silent treatment

😆 😆 With that she is driving him up the to wall .. I love this spunky Khushi ... I think he will go bananas without her lime n lemony scent for two days ...

Dying to read the next update ...

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Preet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#594

beautiful, fantastic, amazing👏 👏 👏

the whole story till now is wonderful, I have no words.

I re-read the last 3 chapters for the second time because the last time I had read so fast that I did not have time to realize exactly what was going on between them, and now that I have re-read, I'm glad, that I did the story is really intriguing. The thing that I like most of all is the fact that you mentioned what Maya Devi think about hem, and what she has in store for this tow.

Love these two sentences:

"You better read the weather forecast first before you pick a dress," she advised herself.🤣

Devi Maiya sighed. This was not enough progress. These two were impossible. One month of morning time together and they were still stuck almost where they started. It was time she intervened again 🤣 🤣 yes, it's right,they need help, but a strong a stong one, I sympathize for Devy Maya, I would not be in his place, guys it isn't easy to control a bomb that could espode at any time (Arnav), and what about the fuljari that sometimes turns off and sometimes does so many sparks
(Khushi). You know, is not advised to keep the fire near the dynamite, because there is a risk that they do boom😆

I love that Khushi is giving Arnav harsh treatment, after what he said he little bit deserve it😃. But at the same time I feel sorry for him😔, in short, he is going crazy with this "sir", the failure to give more lifts, not to smell her perfume poor Arnav.

Continue soon, thanks for the PMS and this awesome and interestig story🤗

Edited by HK90 - 12 years ago

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Arina Raizada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#595

Been busy. 😔

Will try to read and comment soon 😊

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jazz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#596

wow that was jus simply wowww

loved it loved it and loved it

thnak u so much for the pm

and m so sorry i somhow ddnt notice the pm and i thought u ddnt updated it man m gonna reread it

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jazz

@jazmeen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#597

W*F i misse part 3 as well i jus read it now

man best part eva loved it loved it

poor raj lol

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Azzmaira

@kookoo864

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Posted: 12 years ago

#598

Loved it! Thanks for pm!

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ENLIGHTENED1

@ENLIGHTENED1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#599

wow such abeautiful FF ... just came across and read all chapters ...very nice

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#600

forgot to add in my comment...

d way u write is awsuumm..i can actually smell d citruss lemon scent around

plzzz update d nxt part soon...

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