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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh ASR!!! What have you done??? In your jealousy you've hust the poor girl!!!!!!!! Bad!!!!!!!! Btw thx for d pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Absolutely Brilliant update...really excited to c khushi is working for him even though it is only for few days...ooohhh...ASR is jealous seeing her laughing with someone...when he is jealous or angry he spits fire...😈...poor khushi...cant wait to read ur next update..and thanx very much for the pm...continue soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chetanahooda

I loved theelegiac way he concentrated on her lips...epic😳


All round the update was amazing!!!👏

My personal fav was when he things that her giving him coffee is homely..awww...man you have no idea how homely it is going to get.

Habit is something that creeps on us, it definitely did for them. And to have kept mum about their morningtrysts...woohoo Khushi ji..ab muh kaise baad reh gaya?😆

Waise thank god, reh gaya!!!😃

I feel sad for Lavanya..always have and in such situations always do. Think to be a Lavanya in someone's life must be so painful!!He is leading her on, unintentionally maybe, but he is doing injustice to a good woman. Love does not, in my interpretation give thatleeway, to lead someone on and then break their hearts💔. It's plain sad, but sometimes a certain story, in fiction and reality need these pushes.🤔

Jealous Arnav...yipeee☺️☺️, Raj ki toh band hi baj gayi...😆😆
ab kya karoge Arnavji, disaster ko executive floor per entry to de di...😲...bas ab dekhte jao..😃

Chalo bhaiya...I mean behna Fab update ke liye suru-kiya!

Love!

Chetana


P.S. Lavanya ke liye koi dhoond dena..jaldi se



Chetana!

This officially is the longest comment I have ever recieved in any of my works. 😆

Haha .. The lips .. It came natuarally to me when I was writing and so I decided to keep it that way.

Habit .. It is interesting that you brought it up. People often confuse habit with love .. I in fact thought of it while designing the plot. It will come into play in the future chapters.

Loved what you wrote on Lavanya .. If someone plans it we can only hate him but when it just happens, we can do nothing but feel sorry for her. I have loved La in the show .. Here I will try not to break her heart much .. :)

suru-kiya for the suru-kiya 😆

Jealousy has its own gameplan .. Dont you think? It can make or break .. Lets see what happens to these two!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --peehu--

uh ah! someone is jealous😆

awesome update..loved it...
so khushi has to deal with ASR now...
this is going to be fun!



Hi Peehu!

Yeap .. Time for her to meet ASR finally .. It is to see how she handles him now. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jealous Arnav!! Ohh he was harsh with her.. hope they didnt take 3 steps back with their progress!!

When Khushi finds out he is also dating lavanya.. her rudeness might come out too!!

nice chapter!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fab one.. But why u took so mucho loner time to update??
N so arni baby is jealous huh???
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey Farha..read the second and third part together...just love the way the story is progressing! Cant wait for the next part😃

Esp loved the way Arnav is already thinking about Khushi all day...and now Arnav is jealous of Raj. Loving it😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: tara.singhania

Oh ASR!!! What have you done??? In your jealousy you've hust the poor girl!!!!!!!! Bad!!!!!!!! Btw thx for d pm..



Typical ASR! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Why jealous men behave like grade A asshole, I'll never understand...
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Originally posted by: annab

Absolutely Brilliant update...really excited to c khushi is working for him even though it is only for few days...ooohhh...ASR is jealous seeing her laughing with someone...when he is jealous or angry he spits fire...😈...poor khushi...cant wait to read ur next update..and thanx very much for the pm...continue soon...😊



Thanks Anna! Khushi needed to know how ASR is .. Those "shut ups" in the car was not even 1% of his bad temper .. Sort of a reality check for her! :)

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