SS: Of Lemons & Limes # 1 (Chapter 1 - 6) - Page 23

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Posted: 12 years ago
I am just stuck at 4th line..the moment you said win win situation, all I cud think of was citrus...and there you were with "Arnav got his free dose of nerve-relaxing spa in the car"...going to read it completely now..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: chetanahooda



Loved the pic references! 😃 The one for Raj was bang on .. I would rather say Poor Arnav than Poor Raj .. Bechara does not even understand what made his blood boil .. Or at least he would not consciously acknowledge!!!

Other body parts? I would have to hire you, darling! That intro in PBY .. Nothing happened and still I had to fan myself!!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Jealous Arnav 😆
Nice update!
Thanks for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

loved it loved it...the green eyed monster has appeared and I love Arnav in his avataar...jealous and possessive! Poor Khushi feeling so bad that he did not remember her...what a sweet habit they have formed of the morning rides together...love how he even knows abt her water situation...that was so cute...thanks for the PM...



Thank you so much Vandana! 🤗

Sit beside Khushi for an hour and just give her an encouraging look .. You will know all about her in a jiffy! Jhalli!!! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor khushi .. feel soo bad for her .. she even docent know why he shout at her ..plz post it soon waiting for it
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Posted: 12 years ago
waow...I'm falling in love with this FF ...it was awesome
I really like the way he gives lift to her daily & she accepts it...
thank god they left their gupta & sir...I really hate it...😉
arnav is jealous...& khushi with laad governor for whole day...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: redwine1



super super super Farah .. awaiting the next update . .. love the way u have woven in Devi Maiyyah here in the story ...




Thank you so much Ruby! 🤗 Only by the blessings of Devi Maiya are these two still alive & kicking together .. 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Omoraboti



Let's for now concentrate on her petite waist..but she wears suits..hmm..make him take her to the date La canceled, make her wear a saree..then the waist fetish could come into play.

Maybe her feet..how could he look at her feet? now that is a good question! May be *I steal from the show* twists her ankle but Mr ASR does not doctor, but take her to a doctor and then does *feet vey*

Her swan like neck, maybe she had water that trickles down her neck and then he muses some scenarios...hmmm.

What say?

P.S. If you don't use them I Will..😆


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Posted: 12 years ago
I loved it! This is the first time m following ur fic..your writing is so simple,yet edgy and binding..
N for the story,its wow..by the way,i start being khushi while i read ff's..first i felt habitual,then jealous (although kkg doesnt know yet about la ji nd arnav ji),then happy,then angry so much that i felt like punching arnav ji,then crying..;) :D
so ya here is one mad stalker of ur fic! :) i love the supporting role of Devi Maiyya .:D
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Posted: 12 years ago
asr in his angry mood wow what a luvly update

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