KriYaansh FF: You Are My World!! - Page 64

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: kuhu_Arsha



tujhe nhi lagta aj kal tu or me kuch jada hi same same kar rhe hain😆


Lol ha re.. Maine abhi realise kiya.. Pehele bhi ho raha tha.. And abhi bhi... And saath mein chor bhi ban gaye ! 😆
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Originally posted by: kuhu_Arsha

hahahha same pinch hetu,,,,,,

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Thik hai.. Thodi der tak mein akele Tp karti hu..
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Posted: 12 years ago
I'll be your dream, I'll be your wish
I'll be your fantasy
I'll be your hope, I'll be your love
Be everything that you need
I'll love you more with every breath
Truly, madly, deeply do

Dekh.. Apne FF ka name yaha se chori kiya tha :P
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Posted: 12 years ago

Thanks guys for liking and appreciating my work!!

I could never believe that you guys will actually like what I write!! I am so happy!!

Irritated by my best friend who came late again,

I sat on the net realizing he was late bcoz of the rain,

Being a d3 lover; I searched for the list of d3 dances,

I found a site who gave me more exploring chances,

A world of ff's os's , ss's and what all not!

The word 'perfct' for india forum is too short.

I got a reason to smile and explore the world I always live in;

Of ArSha, d3 and KriYaansh; without whom I'm broken!

You can never finish enough on this site,

New wondersagain and again, day and night!

After about an hour he reached my place,

Ready to go through manao-seju's-temper case.

I pulled his hair and slapped his head,

If IF wasn't there, he would have been DEAD!!

Was just thinking about my first visit to this site and thought of this irritating childish poem! Sorry, bahot zyaada pakka diya na!!

So, here you go!!

Chapter 6

CHARITY EVENT

'rey kahan hain????"

"Sharon, don't panic! You know ki pechhle tin dino se rey har cheez ko kuch zyaada hi lightly le raha hain aur pata nahi kaha rehta hain! I thought we finally got our our old, cool, charming rey back but don't you think he is too cool, too charming and more over too distracted these days? I hardly saw him and when he IS with us, he is either texting, on phone or lost in some thoughts. Do you think everything's alright?"

Sharon grinned at the thought of his best friend going total latoo over her bhabhi. She was only here since the last 3 days and had already drived rey crazy in love with her. Even Sharon and swayam who knew about kriya's return were the most happy beings now, at last kriya's magic was already back over whoever she met and mohan kaka, rdx, nichole and karan sir were no exceptions.

Sharon: simmi, don't worry. He wil be here soon. I am just thinking how will everything go? I mean, rey's doing duet with whom? And what about your performance?

Simmi: don't know what's gonna happen. Challo, lets just hope what ever rey's up to goes well or we just go in heaven than hell when we are so dead!

They joined the rest of the gang backstage. There was a huge rush all around. Everyone were busy doing something or the other, lights arrangement went wrong so their was extra panic and caos. Simmi placed sharon (she has her right hand and left leg fractured, if you all remember) on the bench beside swayam who was busy doing some corrections in some file. Kriya had brought swaron close and they started liking each other a lot, no issues and no misunderstandings.

Sharon sat and simmi helped her being comfortable then left for working out on her anchoring.

Sharon: (whisper to swayam) where is rey?!

Swayam: (smiling and whispering back) humaare rey baba, kriya madam ko chhodne ke liye taiyaar hi nahi! Jab maine aur kriya ne bahot force kiya toh who finally aane ke liye taiyaar ho gaya par apne saath apni baatcutter ko bhi lein aaya! Iss Reyaansh Singhania ka kuch nahi ko sakta! Kriya madam sabse chhup rahi hain toh unke linecutter unke saath chup rahe hain so that they can romance chori-chori chhupke-chhupke!! (wink)

She first got lost in swayam's charm then started laughing at her so bollywood type bhai-bhabhi!!

(guys, please remember:-

KriYaansh: Love Birds!!

SwaRon: Secret Adorers!!

KriYam : Brother- Sister!!

KriSha: Besties!!

ShaRey: Close Best Friends Like Bro-Sis!!

ReYam: Chuddy Buddys!! )

Sharon: so, when is kriya meeting everyone else?

Swayam: after the charity event. Hey, do you think they both are planning to get married??

Sharon: WHAT!?!?! THEY JUST MET 3 DAYS AGO!!!!!!

This caused all eyes darting at Sharon. Everyone looked at the two curiously and wondering what was going on.

Vishaka: dude, what you talking about? Who met whom three days ago?

Swayam: Vishaka, she is talking about neha and karan sir. See, they just met 3 days ago and she is already going just ga-ga on him, not even thinking about Vicky!!

Sharon helplessly nodded admiring admiring swayam's On-The-Spot-Story-Telling skills!

Vicky fumed with anger though, looking really cute as neha got lost in karan sir's world as we all know how much the girls awed him and how much the boys envy him……

But before Vicky could say anything, the show started and nimmi's voice could be heard. Everyone got panicked; someone's costume problem, hair problem, make-up problem, accessories problem, foot wear problem, steps problem, routine problem, position problem, time problem, and god only knows what all not!

Rinni: mera band kahan hain?

Vishaka: dude, my shoes are missing!

Bharat: yaar, yeh saale baal betthte kyun nahi?

Amar: mela pel mul Gaya! (Mera per mud gaya!)

Neha: haye Rama! Now what neha doing?! Her make-up, full ka fu;; goes smudging, smudging and smudging!! Nahi!!!!!! (Meloy drama)

Swayam: gosh this tie!!

Sharon couldn't see swayam, HER swayam struggling so not taking any more torture to the eyes she offered to help but he politely declined.

Sharon: uff ho! Iddhar aao, I'll do it!

He now shyly nodded and sat next to her, and she blushing to the core got the tie in its right position and texture.

Vicky: mujhe mera hair spray nahi mil raha!!!

Vishaka: man, my shoes!! Guys, please just don't forget them!

Everyone was running here and there everywhere they could go in the backstage dressing room. But one scream, one shout stopped tthem on track. It was so loud that if the cheers were not so defeaning, even the audience would have been able to hear it, but it only went as far that even nimmi on the stage could here it.

"STOP IT!!! THE MOST IMPORTANT THING IS ; WHERE IS REY??? NOT YOUR BAND, SHOES, HAIR SPRAY, LEG, JUST NOTHING!!! ONLY REY!!!! WHERE IS HE??? REY!!!! HE'S THE ONE WHO WE ALL SHOULD BE BUT FORTUNATELY ONLY I AM WORRIED OF!!! SO DISGUSTING IF CALL YOURSELVES HIS FRIENDS!! REY……..REY…….!!!! WHERE ARE YOU???"

With this, the speaker has tears in it's eyes. Everyone was too shocked and confused to respond, and specially SwaRon. Swayam went in front of the person, eyes open wide in shock and a total confused expression.

Swayam: Taani, you alright? Tum rey ko kyun dhoond rahi ho, aur who bhi aise? Chilayi kyun?

She shoved swayam's hands off her shoulders which he had put while asking her and sat on the couch wondering where rey was………where HER rey was??? She had so framed her picture with the prince charming that she couldn't think of anyone but him and was sure he belonged to her even after their numerous meets where reyhad barely said two words to her and that was just to ask for water aor time when he was visiting swayam. And only because she had fallen on him ONCE, and that too on his arm and he had just balanced her by keeping a hand on her back, not even gripping her waist which would have done a way better job as she had already slipped even after he helped her and he just did what a normal person does actually less than that but she had already gone crazy to think practical and that rey was gag a on her that he helped her.

Everyone stared at her and the entry of a storming Reyaansh took place. He busted the door open and hobbled in. he was total breathless and looked very cute in all the panting. Taani got up and was about to rush towards him but realized that everyone was in the room only so it wasn't the right time to say what she wanted to say since day one.swayam pulled rey to the side bench, away from everyone but next to Sharon.

Swayam: rey, tu kahan tha??

Sharon: everyone was so worried about you! Where were you and why are you so late?

Rey: sorry guys! Actually, footloose elims ke time when kriya and I were practicing and showing each other are moves, she started eating her favorite choco-orange lindt which she said she eats whenever she is tensed about a performance. So today, she was looking so cute that I really wanted to give her something that will pamper her, toh wohi lene gaya tha aur who kahin mili nahi toh late ho gaya! And I really wanted baatcutter to eat it today so just had to get them!!!

Swayam and Sharon first looked at rey, then at each other and burst out laughing. Rey in his deewaana avatar was a new and very funny concept! Rey looked down scratching the back of his head, looking more amusing to their eyes.

Sharon: achcha waise, where is my bhabhi? And we were discussing, are you guys planning to get married?

Rey blushed and got lost in thoughts, baatcutter thoughts.

Swayam: rey?

Sharon: reyyy….?? (she stretched the name)

They moved their hands up and down in front of his face, clicked their fingers in front of his eyes, but he was too lost in kriya.

Swaron: REY!!!!!

He came back to reality, shaking his head. Swayam nudged him by the elbow to speak up. Rey digged his hands in his jacket pocket and took out a small, cushioned ring box. He opened it and there stood a gleaming, shining diamond ring:

Rey: I went to buy this actually……….issliye late ho gaya!

Sharon got way too excited from the ring and she took it in her hands to have a better look. Instead of the ring, swayam started admiring her and just got lost. Rey nudged him out of his dream and smirked at him with that deadly evil grin and teasing eyes, swayam blushed and darted him a look making him amusingly chuckle.

Sharon: rey, so? What are you waiting for? Go to her na! swayam ne kaha kit um use yahan bhi le aaye, haaww! Naughty boy mr.singhania!!ab who yahan hain so go ahead!

Rey: er…….there is a problem actually!

Swayam raised his eyebrows, rey raked his hand through his hair and Sharon from her hand asking 'what?'

Rey: er…..i…….um..m….i..dont know how to …….propose…

Swaron as expected laughed hard on this.

Swayam: dude, so what now? You bought a ring, love her with all your might, but a crazy person that you are…don't even know how to propose! Jeez rey!!

Rey: abbey, tu kab kaam aayega? You are here, the BRILLIANT, mr.perfect romance king…….the chocolate lover boy!!

Sharon raised her eyebrow at swayam, he looked down hiding the sweet smile that had erupt up on his face.

ON THE STAGE

Simmi: so guys, here we have had some of the most amazing performances!

Nilesh: but guys, still not the most amazing performance in our duets category! So guys, put your hands together for the duet from ST.LOUISE!!!!!

BACKSTAGE

Gang: oh shit!!!

Everyone got panicked because they still didn't know what on earth rey's plan was. They thrusted his clothes in his hands and he quickly got ready. He came out and was standing on the foot of entrance of the stage waiting for someone.

A gentle hand was placed on his shoulders. He grinned. Praying to universe ji (he had got his baatcutter tactics by now) to give him the power to not go lost in her, he slowly turned around and to his disappointment, it was Taani (the naani). She gave him a quick hug.

Taani: rey, best of luck! Waise aapka plan kya hain? How are you gonna perform a duet alone?

Rey: (he was as it is taken aback by her hug and was a bit confused about the situation) Taani, actually ma- (Taani interrupted him)

Taani: you don't need to say it! I already know! Aap duet mere saath karne waale ho na?

(rey now noticed that she was actually wearing sharon's dress that was looking very fugly on her and she was all ready)

Her eyes gleamed, he was shocked. He was about to answer her back but nilesh and simmi came back from the stage andpulled him.

Simmi: dude, what are you gonna do?...(she looked behind him and saw the naani all ready and looking really bad all dressed)……..HER????

Nilesh followed simmi's gaze and his mouth flung open. He looked at rey, brows furrowed and shook his head in disbelief and disappointed, his mouth finally closed. He gulped and bring back his saucer-size eyes back to normal.

Nilesh: dude, the song's still apologize………….

He took smmi's hand and walked pass the two without uttering or hearing a single word.

The crowd's hooted and sprang into a chorus of 'we want rey'. Reu tok a step on the stage, looked back at the eager Taani and whispered: Don't come………….

The lights went out, he was all alone on the stage, incomplete. In duet, a guy is incomplete without a girl…………….in life, rey is incomplete without his baatcutter. A figure appeared in the darkness, and no one was able to make out who it was except the chhabilal……….how could he not recognize his romaira???

Lights back on, song played an then…………. For there performance, >click here<

BACKSTAGE AFTER THE PERFORMANCE

EVERYONE WAS SHOCKED………………..shocked?? hell no!! they were damn dead shocked!! Terrified!! Only one name, only one question and the sight of rey hugging kriya from behind in front of them……….only made them more confused and SwaRon happier. The gang looked at the two fully confused why they weren't surprised.

Nilesh: swayam, tujhe kya hua?

Swayam: mujhe kya hoga?? (casually and smirking at KriYaansh thinking that they cant even let go of their romance on stage also! )

Neha: swayam, you please believing! That is humaari kriya!! Don't be your imagination that is! It not is!!

Swaron shared a smile on their friend's ultra stupid reaction.

Vicky: oye, aaj kal humaare gang ke characters kuch zyaada hi ajeeb nahi hain?? Kabhi rey ka bhoot aa jata hain………Kabhi kriya ka!!

Everyone as usual ignored it but neha thinks whether her babu was saying the truth……..it could be right!

Sharon: simmi, I think you both should go on stage now………

Nimmi, totally confused moved towards the stage………

ON THE STAGE

KriYaansh broke apart, unwillingly but as they had to finish their performance and bowed holding hands. Nimi entered the stage and it took about five minutes for everyone to hear what they were actually saying because of the never ending enthusiastic response from the audience.

Nilesh: that was a performance man! That was THE performance! It surely left our mouths hanging open! (he looked at rey with an angry look and said it again through gritted teeth) it surely did leave our mouths hanging!!

Nilesh darted him a look but rey just shrugged and evily grinned, going back to put his left hand around his baatcutter's waist.

Simmi: guys, so did you enjoy it??

She extended the mic with her arm to the audience from left to right, then back to herself.

Simmi: I can't hear you guys! Mind to be a bit louder!!

She did that again and finally pulled it back when she got the whole audience going crazy!!

Nilesh: ok! So now, get ready for KR College!! We are gonna meet you in some time after this with the master blaster end; our performance followed by rey and swayam who are gonna blow the chudail away!!!

They dragged KriYaansh from the stage…….simmi dragged kriya nd nilesh rey so they were a bit separate which neither liked.

BACKSTAGE

Gang: Jaldi laao!!inn dono ki bahot band bajaani hain!!

Kriyaansh and swaron got confused!

Swaron: band bajaani matlab??

Vishaka: matlab: dude, what do you think?? Rey all day gone!! Where?? No one's got any idea!!

Neha: newspapers mein itni badi news!! Hum sabne ne padi!! And swayam crying and we all acting! Then Sharon taking swayam in reahearsal hall and he becoming too happy!! How come??

Simmi: rey changed!! Soo so so much!! Then Sharon not returning for so long and when we follow her in, then what should we find??

All left (amar, bharat, Vishaka, Vicky, nilesh and rinni): kriya!!!

Kriya: toh tum sab ko pata tha????

Vishaka, neha , rinni and simmi gave bone crushing hugs to kriya leaving her more surprised.

Rimmi: haan buddhoo!! And we even knew that you guys are a couple! So chill and just enjoy with us!!

The girls had a huge hugging session while the guys took rey and teased him A LOT!!!

Vicky: oh ho mera majnu!!! Mujhe pata tha! Ye dono toh rdx ki party mein bhi ekk hi kamraa aur yeh toh jacket less!!!! Oh ho!!!!!

He teased him more and tickled him in the stomach…….

Nilesh: bahot jalta tha na tu! Jab hum swayam ko kriya ka bf bolte the??!!

Rey: haan toh agar simmi ko main Vicky ki gf bolu toh tera ka haal hoga??

Everyone agreed and said rey had a strong point but swayam wouldn't leave the chance……

Swayam: par phir bhi yaar! Rey aur kriya toh……..!!!!

They had a huge leg pulling session with girls and boys together impact act attack!!! They suffered and finally it was the time for their performance………

The girls dragged kriya and she changed into sharon's dress which was way too short for her and she just was looking STUNNING!!!!! She came out and so did the boys. Everyone started getting ready and adding special last minute touches to themselves. Rey couldn't take his eyes off this super hot girlfriend of his and he went behind her and just grabbed her. She was about to shout but he covered her mouth with his palm and whispered: gorgeous……….baatcuter, I didn't know you were so damn hawt!!!

She blushed and was looking more adorable that rey not resisting her, leaned forward to have a love making session but…….

Rinni: ahemm…..ahemm!!! guys, you are here with us!! Apne bedroom me jaakar romance karna!!

They sprang apart as they had totally forgot where they were………..they felt embarrassed and kriya was blushing while rey was groaning in irritation of loosing the moment………………………….

Rey: rinni!!! Tumhe dekhna Zaroori tha kya??

Everyone laughed, including kriya. She looked at him and he made a sad face to which she melted and made a cute puppy face.

Kriya: aww…..my poor baby! Here…………

She moved in front of him and helped him with his tie. It was not in the perfect condition as it was not tied by her. She started opening the cloth piece and tying it and he just being the lover boy, wrapped his arms around her waist pulling her close and taking all the advantages of the moment. They were pulled apart by ViHa and were dragged to take there respected places on the stage………………(note: the performance has kriya instead of Sharon) >their performance<

After the performance was done, rey and swayam changed and gave their performance………>reyam performance<

Charity event was over and everyone met in the etrium. Rey and swayam entered as they were changing from their jaa chudail costume.

Rey: hi guys! Performance kaisa tha? Kaisa laga?

Sharon: humme kaisa laga ya isse kaisa laga? (she pointed teasingly at kriya who was sitting next to her.)

Rey raked his hand through his hair, embarrased and everybody laughed. It was obvious that rey wanted to know how she felt it was, not others.

Neha: kriya, so tellling rey na, tumhe kaisa laga?

Kriya shrugged and ignored the question, to which everyone got confused why she was acting like this and Sharon chuckled.

Swaym: kriya, tumhe kya jua? And Sharon, why are you laughing?

Sharon: woh kya hain na, miss kriya is a bit angry at mr. Reyaansh for performing this dance. You know, it just showed how much he and swayam hates us now! That's why! I know, ki yeh dance pehle se hi fix tha par iska ye hi matlab hua na ki jab kriya yahan nahi thi toh rey hated her.

Rey's mouthf hung open and he was worried sick if that was what kriya thought. She darted him a disgusted look and walked away from there, he gulped hard. He looked around at the gang and they showed him a thumbs up and wished luck as manofying kriya was a way too tough job!

Rey ran behind kriya and reached the parking lot. She was about to go home, but was damn confused what to do as she used to travel in rey's car now and with rey only. She just stood there looking around and thought of going in a cab but was stopped by rey.

Rey: kriya, meri baaat toh sunno……..

Kriya: rey, mujhe kuch nahi sunna!!

Rey: par maine kiya kya??

Kriya: oh!! Maine kya kiya??? Poore college aur doosre colleges ke saamne mera mazaak banaya! Saraa hua aloo hanna?? And more over I am the biggest chudail now! Thank you mr. Reyaansh Singhania!

He knew he was dead now! She used to call him by his full name whenever she was mad at him, and that included this moment…….

Rey: achcha baba, par challo ghar toh challo! Araam se baat kar lenge! Ab gari mein battho……..

He walked to the car and opened the door but kriya was standing on the same spot, hands folded on her chest. He looked at her with a confused expression.

Rey: kriya? Challo toh……

Kriya darted him a look and put on a fake smile, a too artificial and sarcastic smile.

Kriya: thank you for the offer but I am that eligible to g on my own. Have a good night and I hope I don't get to see you again!

With this she marched of and with her just one hand raised, three cabs immediately arrived to give the diva and princess a ride home. She got in one and looked at rey in an angry way then disappeared. Rey was still in the same position and groaned, closing his eyes.

Rey: (murmur) chal beta rey, apni baatcutter ko manane ki tayaari kar le! Ise manana koi asaan kaam nahi………….

He got in his car and drove home.

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Khatam!!!!!!!! I know ki itna achcha nahi tha aur jitni wait maine tum logo se karayi, uske liye deserving nahi tha!! Par I deserve a maafi na??

challo, challo...ab jaldi se like ka button press karo and start showering your comments cause i have been missing them alot!!!!


DEMAND: 130 pages!!!!! start your process to complete it and i am very sorry again for such a late update!!

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rockng update sejz,,,,,,,,,,⭐️⭐️

i jst luv it,,,,😃

dance prt was mindblowing,,,,👏

ps, sry 4 late cmt
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