IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

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Posted: 12 years ago

#841

How do you write such good chapters, that without fail make me cry?

I am someone who just reads a story for the happy ending, and even though I know this one won't have one, I still get compelled to read it because you write so well!

Looking forward to read the next chapter!

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nisha_mehta

@nisha_mehta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#842

How could ASR let his daughter go.
Contnue soon

Edited by asha_mehta - 12 years ago

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ipkknd_gbdfan

@ipkknd_gbdfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#843

Khushi is actually dead...somewhere, I was hoping that by some magical thing, she would be alive...

Arnav gave up the little Khushi...Why? Doesn't he want the last sign of their love to grow up with him?

The bad feeling Amrita is having is probably because little Khushi is not happy and I hope that Arnav comes in...but I don't want Arnav and Amrita to have a relationship for little Khushi's sake.

Aman was great...but will he tell the whereabouts of little Khushi to ASR if he sees his health declining?

Fantastic update! Can't wait for the next one :D

But the thing with this story is that it is packed with lots of emotions...I still remembered that there was a Payal-Arnav talk in the Gupta house and I cried so much at that...so, I fear to read this story from the beginning (which is something I do with many FFs) :D

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aeyshaalim

@aeyshaalim

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Posted: 12 years ago

#844

Omg I'm just speechless
My heart goes to all of them
Asr,Amrita n little khushi

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emistry

@emistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#845

I don't know how you do this.. render me speechless after each update!

i don't even know what to say after reading this.. that he just let go... no strings attached...

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StripePurple

@StripePurple

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Posted: 12 years ago

#846

I will not pretend to "understand" ASR in this FF, because I don't think I do. Neither do I want to, because that kind of self-loathing and pain, if I ever truly understood it, I would probably never stop crying. so I try my level best to look at him as objectively as possible. But the force of your writing makes that impossible. I cannot take sides, I cannot find answers, everything here confuses me...and that is depressing as hell.

You confirmed with this update what I had long suspected...Arnav chose to live as a punishment. & frankly, he will never escape this punishment, whether he ultimately gets his daughter or not. I don't know how you're going to end this. All I can hope for this tortured man whose entire life is a penance is that he learns to feel again. That one day he will like waking up in the morning, alive. It has got nothing do with getting his life or his love back. Maybe it's just destiny. That's all.

Incredible piece of writing.

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Deepti

@deepti1906

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Posted: 12 years ago

#847

Read ur SS in one go and i'm literally crying right now... This is heart wrenching... But i really loved it...*sniff* *sniff*
Do update soon...

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naina50

@naina50

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Posted: 12 years ago

#848

Thanks for the update .. that was phenomenal .. Arnav's penance was absolutely moving ...

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SS88

@SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#849

Simply fabulous. That's all I can say. I was tearing up when I read Arnav's dialogues.

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Uthra

@Viji79

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Posted: 12 years ago

#850

The life that ASR has lived for the past years was heart wrenching. The way he completely gave away his Khushi to Amrita was superior. Amrita's insecurities are totally justified. Aman's involvement was a surprise, but a pleasant one.