IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25

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Polkadots78

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Posted: 12 years ago

#831

How do you write these heart wrenchingly good chapters every time??? None of my praise would do justice to what you have written...I am just gonna enjoy every word again and appreciate you more...

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Downhill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#832

simply fabulous.loved it..beautifully written ...

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panck

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Posted: 12 years ago

#833

What a beautifully written update, Navin

I could "feel" Arnav's despair, little Khushi's confusion, Amrita's agony

Wonder what lies ahead

Have a wonderful Xmas and New Year

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devsum

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Posted: 12 years ago

#834

i cannot help my tears.. for both Khushis, Amrita and Arnav...I read this chapter thoroughly. Loved the way u described Arnav's state of mind...

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shalini_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#835

ASR did give up Khushi.. I didnt expect it.. felt bad for both Amrita & him...

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Aliya_hzsn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#836

Curiosity at its Peak!! Amazing writing!!
My mind's filled with a lot of Questions right now!!!
Hopefully the Next chapter will give us some inlight..!!

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mysticmanthri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#837

you did once again made me feel for everyone around... little khushi,amrutha ,aman and arnav.

why did you make us hate arnav in the beginning and feel sorry for him now despite of his mistakes?that part i literally cried...

this update particularly is very overwhelming...great writing as always...

merry christmas and new year to you and your family!

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zyanah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#838

Arnav's monologue was downright amazing

despair cud not have been described more beautifully...Thnakyou so much for the amazing update

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Jina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#839

So much agony... Oh God! And glad that ASR was just this time... Wish Amrita does the same, i.e., do the right thing, and not take harsh decisions (which she herself doesn't find convincing) on an impulse. More so, for little Khushi's happiness... And you're making me more impatient by saying that you have the remaining chapters ready. ;)

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citi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#840

ASR truly is atoning for what he did or didn't do. Brilliant is the only way to describe how you have laid the man bare and yet built him up in the face of the tragedy he committed. Amrita's innate decency and sense of fairness can't stay dormant for long, especially now that the Raizada threat she feared has not materialized. He has, and I think so will she, do what is best for little Khushi.

P.S. - People remember 15 pages 😃 Let's do it fast.