IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25 - Page 86

Navin, being a mother of a 5 year old girl can understand..God...it hurts

ASR giving up so easily does not seem right, However Arnav allowing his daughter to leave perhaps does.. What is going on within his mind for him to just disappear like that from little Khuhsi's life

Is it reverse psychology for Amrita to believe all is well, Is he lulling her into a false sense of security, or simply Arnav understands her pain of having loved and lost...He has let go and become a recluse awaiting death to join his Khushi. your writing is amazing and I did cry for Arnav, cannot bear to see him in pain no matter what he does or did, he always pays a heavy price for his actions..

Amrita believes moving away will allow little Khushi to forget Arnav... perhaps Amrita's maternal instincts are beginning to see her mistake, Little Khushi may never forget or recover from her heartbreak, perhaps she too felt something with Arnav that she cannot understand beyond that she feels sad and misses him... cannot wait for your update..

Beautiful update...emotions were well laid in each line.

I'm speechless, can't stop crying... My heart is aching for Amrita and Arnav. I read this chapter 3 times...you have written it so brilliantly that trust me or not I can "feel" Arnav's and Amrita's agony and despair.
Eagerly waiting for the next part

pain, remorse, guilt... so many emotions arnav has had to reckon with... and loss above all... giving up little khushi may be his way to allow amrita to have a life not just exist like he has for the last 8 years.. and little khushi would also need her mother.. the only parent she knows... a truly brave decision whichever way..

aman seems to be angry with arnav for what he did to khushi.. his khushi bhabhi.. nice of him to help amrita... i wonder why arnav sacked him? or did he resign himself?

i hope amrita can eventually when her fears have calmed down let arnav have some part in little khushi's life even if only for the little child's happiness... of course asr is a force to be cared of but arnav doesnt seem to be...

little khushi she seems to be getting crushed under the weight of the adults' decisions...


beautifully written!

chapter 9 -I actually was not happy with the revelation..,i was not happy for Arnav even after knowing that little Khushi is his daughter..

up till now i hated the arnav in this story. i felt no pity for him. i felt he truly deserved everything he was going through. but with this chapter i felt arnav finally did something right. i dont know of he can ever have a happy ending but he can have something to live for. now that he himself gave up khushi i want amrita to take khushi to him. i think hes finally proven he deserves another chance, a reason to live again.

I felt so many emotions...while reading this update...Arnav's remorse was palpable..andI could undertand the need for Amrita to hold on to Khushi,as she is right now,her only anchor,for living...beautiful update!

Amrita knows what she's doing isn't wrong...but isn't right either...