IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25

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arisai

@arisai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: napstermonster

I swear to you, I thought...thats gonna show up Arisai...no way would she be up at this time of the night...and there you were. Lets just give up, give an ambiguous name to our creepy symbiotic relationship and move in together to breed Persian cats in between bouts of alcoholism. And yeah, I have "aunts" who are doing JUST that...I farak you!

Symbiosis is good. You write, I leave long gushing comment, you write more. I LIKE THIS. It's healthy 😆

Hahahaaa, there is no escape. Ever. Especially not for this story. Which I love already. I am all in for legitimising this whole affair. I imagine this all going down in an old ostentatious house with a butler like Emil from Tim Burton's Corpse Bride.

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HaRul-lover

@HaRul-lover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

this is magic im mesmerized honestly BREATH TAKING great work loved it

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Rita

@rjhaveri

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

oh the mystery! Where is his Khushi? The little Khushi is adorable.

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angelicdeepti

@angelicdeepti

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#74

wow...cant wait for the next part

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Sonia

@sonia_92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

and I thought the confusion would be over ... dear lord

you're really enjoying.this , aren't you? how what why ? the little girls concern is so adorable but what in the world is the connection ? I'm sure for some reason that actual khushi is currently absent from arnav's life but what's the connection with the kid and if arnav thinks the kid resembles his khushi then okay but why were payal and anjali reacting the way they were

you have to update this faster, I'm too curious to stop thinking about this

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smitzy

@smitzy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

This was SIMPLY superb!!

I love it when writers use instances from the past world of IPK into their writings.. infuses a sense of warmth and recognition! Beautiful work.. I have already started imagining how little khushi looks like.. maybe a bit like Arnav and Khushi both?

awww I feel for Arnav, I really do! which is the sign of a good story isn't it.

cheers navin! Keep it up! 😊

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farheen75

@farheen75

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#77

I am really really confused now... It's a bit creepy isn't it? A little kid acting like Khushi but where is Khushi? Is it reincarnation theme or may be Khushi has given up her daughter for adoption I mean there r so many possibilities but whatever the scenario will one thing I am sure of is its going to be mind blowing considering that u r writing it so I am gonna sit back and enjoy every moment of this amazing story.

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Kurup

@Kurup

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Hey dude...This OS is interesting, amazing, yet confusing...Kuch bhii samajh mein nahin aaarahaa haiii. Y is it tat people r stunned at the little girl named Khushi and Her mom a junor employee of AR fashions...wats all this yaaar...Clear our doubts fast.

Plz plz plz PM me with ur next update.