IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25

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NothingLasts

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

I want to know what happened in the past. I can sense this might be Khushi in another form (if she is dead) or maybe their daughter who Khushi might have ha to give up at birth. I don't know but I can't wait!

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Ann Maria

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

Well I'm definitely hooked! :)

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EXPELLIARMUS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

a)I love your writing

b) I want an update

c)I am confused

d)I want an update

e)I love the use of Tum theek ho and thoda dard hoga

f)I want an update

g)Is Arnav going to cry?

Oh, did I mention that I want an update?

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

RAFA GOT FIRST SPOT AGAIN?!

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TabbyJ.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

omg!!
so i thought my confusion wud be cleared but no it has increased!!
is this khushi adopted and the real mother is 'the khushi' hehe i know i ssound crazy!
amazing update yet again!
the expressions portrayed were beautiful!

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Navin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS
a)I love your writing

b) I want an update

c)I am confused

d)I want an update

e)I love the use of Tum theek ho and thoda dard hoga

f)I want an update

g)Is Arnav going to cry?

Oh, did I mention that I want an update?

Juhi, Im just TOTALLY winging it here, but for some reason my Spidey-Sense is tingling and I have this odd, totally from the left-field, practically psychic thought---is it at ALL POSSIBLE that you want an update?

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Anon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Just read both parts and, once again, really really impressed 👏

When I first started reading, I assumed this was actually THE Khushi as a child, and it wasn't up until "... after years of not feeling anything...", that I understood that this was a different Khushi ... after which my mind rapidly drew a conclusion that Khushi was dead or absent from his life. And the way you incorporated those little moments that THE Arnav and Khushi had with this Arnav and Khushi and turned it so innocent was really beautiful :')

And Khushi's 'mum' actually works within AR?! :O

To be honest, I'd like to feel sorry for Arnav, really I would, but I just can't bring myself to. At ALL. Yes, it's upsetting, definitely, that he's found someone with SUCH a likeness to Khushi and he's clearly had a past trauma related to her, but knowing him, he's probably the reason she's gone.

Although, I don't want to jump to conclusions, as this could all just be a huge misunderstanding as our favourite couple are prone to time after time 😆

Looking forward to the next update! ⭐️

Also, if possible, may I be PM-ed for the next update? 😊

Edited by MsIPKKNDManic - 12 years ago

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emistry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

waitt... this blows my theory of khushi being khushi's daughter out of the water!!! interesting!

Obviously Payal made the connection too!!! interesting!

Cant wait to see where this goes!!

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BlueMystique

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: napstermonster

Juhi, Im just TOTALLY winging it here, but for some reason my Spidey-Sense is tingling and I have this odd, totally from the left-field, practically psychic thought---is it at ALL POSSIBLE that you want an update?

See! This is why you are a genius! So, get to it!

PS: Sorry! Couldn't resist! *angelic smile*

Edited by BlueMystique - 12 years ago