IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25

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ssafdar

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Chapter 7 made me cry for Payal's pain and chapter 8 made me cry for Arnav's pain...i'm a mess!!

Brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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crazyweird

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Posted: 12 years ago

#662

Very touching updates awesome too

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Devilways

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Posted: 12 years ago

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I am generally a no cry person but I feel like it now. his pain is palpable in your words. its so sad, those few lines thori der ke liye! never have i felt so bad about it, those few words written.

his request to payal in the least bit was a plea of a broken man!

now i dont know where i want this story to go! I know its going to be good which ever way you take it.

beautiful update!

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savvz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#664

u made me cry.. last two chapters... were awesomely emotional...

Edited by savvz - 12 years ago

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IPKWA

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Posted: 12 years ago

#665

You have such a way with words!

Honestly I think this is my favourite short story.

I just had such an overwhelming urge to cry when I was done reading it.

You are just brilliant!

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fanboy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#666

This is such a painful story of what could have been...can we please please have some redemption and joy

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UV_Arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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that was so sad...:( I know it was his fault but can't bear to see Arnav in so much pain...I wish Khushi was alive so that she would comfort him, love him, forgive him...i know Khushi would have done it cause that's her nature- loving, caring, nurturing, forgiving...but alas! anyway i'm dying to know what happens next..

really liking the story...very nicely written..great work!👍🏼