IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25

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Mariam

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Posted: 12 years ago

#561

The description, the mood, the tone, amazing.

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peepli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#562

That was intense,... No idea how to describe the emotions this chapter evoked in me, .. But it was truly beautiful...
Arnav doesn't deserve anything left of her... Payal s words were beautiful, especially "simran"

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Bhooma01

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Posted: 12 years ago

#563

You make me want to do something about all the Khushis that live in our country, our cities, in our neighbourhood.

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IronButterfly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#564

Wow, getting deep and intense.

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summaiya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#565

good that Payal put some home truths in front of him...he has been so cruel...is the redemption and the suffering that he is going through now enough for this life time?

Excellent update. Loved it

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kritika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#566

U made me cry dear
i am speechless
plz continue soon

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aura9

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Posted: 12 years ago

#567

you made me cry, dear. I now understand why Payal had been so much indifferent to Arnav. I think a part of Khushi is still alive in this planet and Payal is very well aware of it.

I am feeling bad for Payal, I can't even imagine how hard it must have been for her to live under the same roof with that man as her brother in law who ruined her sister's life and almost literally killed her in every possible way. She hadn't been able to forgive herself for she believes that she couldn't stand beside her sister at the tough times.

Now Arnav wants to think that this Khushi is his daughter. So that it can ease his guilt and conscience, how convenient.

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devsum

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Posted: 12 years ago

#568

is it really a sequel? it's too hard breaking. navin... please give me my happy ever after...

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jenshad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#569

LOVED Payal, She Is So Damn Strong . Awww, Khuhsi Died Because Of Child Birth :(( 🥺

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dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#570

"I don't know if this little girl is Khushi's daughter. I hope she is not, for her own sake. But let's say she is. Let's say somehow, she is Khushi's child. And you have got your hands on Khushi's last creation. Let us say this tragedy has happened, and another girl named Khushi has come into your hands.

How dare you think that you deserve to be this Khushi's father? How dare you ask for even a tiny part of my sister again? Whoever this little girl is--your blood, or not--even if you fathered her, gave her life--- you are not her father. She would be better off dead, like my Khushi actually is. Better to be gone, away from the rakshash's cruelty, than to dream about the prince's love. Take this child home, Arnav-ji, and return her to her mother.

You don't deserve to breathe again, to live again through this little girl. My sister does not breathe or live. What makes you think you should?"

way to go payal loved how she gave it out for him he deserved every word everything she said he don't deserve khushi and never did he sister died because of him and only him she died alone with her baby and was insulted evey day and every way why does he get a second chance no mistake of khushi but his his pride his ego his hate and an innocent 18 year old who loved him waited from him to come for her she trusted him and he broke it and she died giving birth to his child alone because of him never he deserve to rot in hell loved the update and akash no back bone