IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25

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vaish912

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Posted: 12 years ago

#551

amazing update ... so painful and harsh at the same time Is she really dead ? 😭 that is so painful

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Ashi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#552

I think I suffered my first case of heartburn after reading this update.😭

Payal, she wishes she were stronger then. But it's shaped the strong willed woman now. :)

Arnav, where do I begin. Could he have really fallen for Dadi machinations? I just can't believe he would abandon a pregnant Khushi. Please let there be more to this.😭

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Posted: 12 years ago

#553

that was hurtful...very hurtful...payal pain,anger n frsutration all in one go

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Ashi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: panck
Navin,
What a wonderful update, I still have tears in my eyes and a lump in my throat. It is so well written that I am not sure if I should feel
sorry for Arnav,
despair for Payal as she has to live with the thought that somewhere/somehow she could/should have done more,
anger at Akash's thoughtlessness or
a deep abiding sorrow about what Khushi went through

That's what makes Navin a brilliant writer. :)

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#555

interesting update..😊

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Swetha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#556

You brought me to tears.

That was emotional...too emotional

I would love to write a longer comment but im really nt in the state to write one. Sorry.

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medha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#557

this was amazing...i was crying my heart out at khushis plight...nobody desrves what khushi went thru n least of all her,the girl with a golden heart whose entire life was dedicated to the happiness of others while sacrificing herself in the process!

im so so disgusted n ashamed n infuriated at arnav...how dare he hope for a salavation n act as though he possesses the little girl?payal is right...it has always been about him n him alone!he is still just as selfish n self-centred!payal's anger,hurt,pain,loss is so brilliantly portrayed...u made me cry n cry so much that now my face is red n my mom is perplexed!actually read the whole story together,so the impact was very hard!!!

lovely,really beautiful n poignant tale!n can i kill arnav?i badly want to!

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snoopy84

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Posted: 12 years ago

#558

Wow that was a painful update cant believe he left her like that. Payal made sure he heard everything all at once really felt for Payal too you wrote it so brilliantly could feel Payal pain through her words

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Angels11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#559

The way Payal narrated the past brought a lump in my throat 😭

And the mystery is still not unveiled. What does Aman want 2 say 😕

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johnangad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#560

my god, my throat is hurting and im filled wid absolute hatred for arnav and the raizada. when it suited him, he abandoned her. when he decided she was too far for him to enjoy punishing her, he decided to find her. now after ignoring her existence for yrs, he wants her child?????????? it doesnt matter that the child is not khushis, wat matters is that arnav still has da audacity to feel a sencse of entitlement after averything he did.

payal's dialogues were beyond amazing, i could feel her pain, self disguat and her total anger at arnav for daring to want what he has no right on. he left her pregnant and alone, aware of what she was going thru. now she is gone, and he cannot find salvation thru a child