IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25

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UV_Arshi

@UV_Arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#291

awww...there is so much sadness...it's heartbreaking...but very well written...so well emoted...i could literally feel Arnav's pain, his desperation...poor soul...😭

liking the story so far...would love to read more...great work..as always!👏

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Angels11

@Angels11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#292

So they met with an accident. Mayb KKG was traveling in the other car/vehicle. God i am tearing my hair apart 😕

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meera

@jblueday

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Posted: 12 years ago

#293

this was so intense. i love all your works. 'perfection' is beautiful in its own way but this one is mindblowing!!😊 The truth is revealed and still arnav is clinging on his hope. i liked how you gave all details about little khushi's past, about amrita-pradeep love story. Description on arnavs emotions were just outstanding. Please continue soon cant wait to read how the story moves on...😃

thanks for the pm👏👏👏

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coalfax

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Posted: 12 years ago

#294

'm excited to read more!! Update soon!!

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inspiringstars

@inspiringstars

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Posted: 12 years ago

#295

What a brilliant update, Navin!

I did not expect it to be so straightforward, in terms of investigations and background checks, but I guess money can indeed buy anything.

The background of Amrita and Pradeep's humble beginnings and little joys of their togetherness really made me wish, Pradeep was alive, poor guy, I feel extremely bad for him.

It is as Anjali and Aman are saying, very difficult, for Khushi to be Arnav's child, there is a very minute possibility, even the luxurious private clinic delivery part has no loop holes, I mean its just so unlikely now. But Arnav wouldnt give up, will he?

This is heart breaking, its like Arnav is alive again for a purpose, whereas he doesnt know the purpose is futile, the battle he wants to fight doesnt even exist!

Loved it.

Pankti

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inanyregard

@inanyregard

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Posted: 12 years ago

#296

Finally had a chance to catch up. Such a lovely story!!

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vaish912

@vaish912

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Posted: 12 years ago

#297

finally read it ... and loving the mystery ... i hope khushi is still alive though ... update soon pls ...

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esmeralda111

@esmeralda111

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Posted: 12 years ago

#298

I read all the 4 updates in one go while holding my breath...and praying that little Khushi is indeed Arnav;s. kindly don't make it otherwise...

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Honkytonk

@Honkytonk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#299

This story is getting more and more interesting with each chapter...love seeing this new side of Arnav, but sad that he is such a broken man and trying to find some peace of mind and happiness back again!!!

Thanks for pm