IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25

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rati123

@rati123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#991

AMAZING !!! I had tears in my eyes. Now fully understand Arnav's point of view. I really hope he gets his 'Khushi' back.

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swat.g

@swat.g

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#992

Chapter 11: so amritas inner voice was khushi isnt she?? Khushi was pleading because khushi wud forgive her arnavji for anything...she cant hold a grudge against any one...she isnt that way..n her daughter knew n felt it instictively that love n relationship...amrita finally asked aman why...n the way he explained..gosh...a great man n a good woman n their love story full of pain n joy...
But to be good---now that is different. You have to measure your life differently, have a different quality to you. Khushi bhabi---no one would have called her a great anything- this sentence was so true!!!! The difference btween them..but the way he explained asrs loss...moved me...coz he has paid for his crimes...soodh sameth...just hope a forgivness from fate to the man who deserves a little bit of love...n peace..love it dammit...
U r making my heart ache for him napster...coz at d start of d story i dint want to forgiv arnav but i cant not forgive him..now...how did u manage to do that?? U r awesome...n ya i desperately want Asr to be with khushi now...

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please6

@please6

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#993

love it and thanks for the pm

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medha

@medha16

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#994

Oh God!!!its 2 oclock at nite n i hav hot tears streaming down my face incessantly...woman,u r too good with ur stuff!

amans speech...it wasso touching n emotional n well something really unique i read!the difference b/w the 'great' n d 'good' n d way u narrated it...just wow!often ppl mix these 2 terms but here ,in this context u simply laid out the diffrence so beautifully n eloquently!it was eloquent n meaningful in its simplicity n reason!

i wont say much more as im short 4 words n also i dont wanna ruin d moment/impact but all i wanna say is that this is brilliant stuff!

Edited by medha16 - 12 years ago

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katunkka

@katunkka

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#995

aww this made me cry.

your an amazing writer

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Rita

@rjhaveri

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#996

Very well written, emotionally gripping story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

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Vee

@reflorated

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#997

I really want Amrita and Arnav to marry in this one. Call me selfish, but I don't want Khushi to be without Arnav or Amrita. She should have both.

SHAADI SHAADI SHAADI

Yes I will act spoilt and bratty

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jisa

@jisa

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#998

whats in ur writing that makes me cry every time???
i cried reading ur story..
i cried most after reading payal-arnav convo in laxminagar house..
after that i cried most on dis chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!
how do u write it??