IPKKND SS:A Girl Named Khushi(Chap. 11)Upd: 12/25

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citi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#971

You put us on an emotional see saw every time. The description of the "great" tycoon and the "good" halwai and their unique relationship is so well expressed. The exposition of what great and good means in the context of people is brilliant.

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smithasrk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#972

Navin, u have a way with words. Cant breath😭

Merry Christmas And a Happy New year😛

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shalini_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#973

i liked how Aman explained things.. he neither suppported Arnav not bring down Khushi.. too good..

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a.vaishnavi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#974

Omg i have cried soo much in this part... oh gosh i dunno even after all these parts where its obvious that khushi is no more.. i still want her to be alive... pls pls do something ..

anb abt little khushi i dont know what is amrita going to do... coz as a mother it is really difficult to let go of ur daughter... plsss let khushi be alive and get bak to arnav... pls

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thechaigirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#975

The makers created an epic love story and a epic love...your story does justice to that. U deserve a standing ovation for this update friend. You have put arnav and khushi in words which I always thought was impossible...SIMPLY BRILLIANT!!!!!👏

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Priyya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#976

This made me cry... 😭 I really do hope Amrita gives Khushi back to Arnav...

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samaz95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#977

So i cried cried and cried some more while catching up on the story from chapter 7!😭

What happened to khushi,payal's narration of khushi's end days just broke my heart.I felt like smashing something on arnav and stupid dadi!

and Akaash I always expected something more from him than this you know!He always considered Arnav his ideal but I really always thought of him as a guy with a back bone but he even disappointed us!

And Arnav he just let me down,but then what he faced all through these 8 years I can't even imagine how he must have tortured himself!

and loved how aman explains to Amrita about Arnav's greatness and Khushi's goodness,I guess that is what destroyed them:(

please please please make Arnav meet his daughter,I know maybe he doesn't deserve it but i can't see him suffering any more:(

You're a truly amazing and gifted writer,continue soon:)

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s s nair

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Posted: 12 years ago

#978

i dont know what to say... i dont want to comment, i ddnt press that like button on your chapter... i dont know why,

i dnt understand the reason of my tears... its very difficult to express my feeling...

Arnav without Khushi i cant imagine that, his pain... oh god... no i dnt want to see his pain, the big loss, Khushi... yes there is a Khushi the little one... but she's not Arnav's soul mate, his Khushi... my angel... im missing her, everyone missing her... an innocent soul with a broken heart... she's gone without any happiness... pain, pain only...

an emotional story, too much...

hmmm... loved or not... very well written story... congrats... 👏

Edited by ..SSNAIR.. - 12 years ago