SwaRon OS ~A Game Of Pool~ - Page 3

Originally posted by: ABBY92

BAZ, You're going to kill me one of this days cause of your HAWT updates !!!..awww then u better watch out for the remaining updates of my SS heheh cause there is nothing but romance in it😈😎... I loved the way Sharon was mad at him even though it was a silly fight and the way she fought with him at the parking lot was adorable 😆!! More than anything, I always love the way you write Swayam in your stories..The way he takes charge and is aware of how he's making Sharon feel with his every word and touch is just WOW !! ...thank you 😳...The way he teased when she was trying to take a shot and then force her to admit that he won was adorable !!! I love the whole Bhabhi bit in the end and Sharon running off, blushing away was the perfect end !! Yet again, another great OS by you !!...thank you so much for those kind words Abby🤗

thank you so much for the comment dear...love you🤗

Originally posted by: asmaju

Baz that was the great work..loved it..
Yup both won in either way here...
It was superb..Yup gonna re read to enjoy the fun again.....awww😃
Thaks for pm..

thank so much for the comment it means alot🤗

Originally posted by: meevee

Hey Baz - u really leave me speechless most times with ur plot and this one is no different....awww Meera api thank you😳..tumhara narration toh mashallah awsum hota hi hai - aaj mujhe sabse achcha laga jo bhi tumne dialogues diye dono ko...that word playwas cute ...thank you so much once again- I wuld b overwhelmed if we culd witness 10% of this kind of rutna manana of SwaRon on the show...ahh show *sigh* no comments😳...its better if i keep my mouth shut about the show rather than say anything at all about it because we all know that it is not going to be good😛 - Swayam ka charm aur Sharon's end tak effort to not fall prey to it yet again but unsuccessful were both equally pleasing to the senses ... a feel good OS for me😃 - I don't deny the passion but it was relative and this Swayam in charge of the situation is what we most wanna c on the show & I'm sure even Sharon too deep down in her heart 😉...you r so right about this hehehe lets see when will Palki mam come to know what our princess wants😛

Meera Api seriously ur comments are so so inspiring and i am always at loss of words as to how to thank you...so thanks a ton for those kind words and appreciation it means more than u think🤗...i am glad u enjoyed my work😃

Originally posted by: manasie

aaawww I found it too cute rather than anything else... Swayam literally trying to seduce her during the game so that she could not concentrate like her clothes used against her... I just loved it Baz awesome work...((:

aww Mansie thanks so much for the comment yaar it means so much😊

Originally posted by: dildostidance01

amazing os

thanks😊

Originally posted by: swaronamit

Wow...simply amazing nd outstanding...one f the finest,sexiest,seductive os i have ever read...i seriously want you to continue it...i would like ro knw wat swayam wants...Hehehe may b i knw bt u knw...

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Originally posted by: pooja123456

Cute os...
Swayam teaching sharon to play pool... :p
Taani continuously saying BHABHI was also nyc...
u described sharon anger and her melting down very well...
Do write more OS's...

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Originally posted by: sweetcherry95

awesome os...you are just a brilliant writer...i am just a humble writer but thank you so much😳

me blushing after reading the os

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Originally posted by: ABCDesiGirl93

loved it! soo cute! but i could recommend you to space out your writing if u can...its just that its so hard trying to follow it sometimes. lol 😉..i will keep that in mind next time😊..thanks for pointing out.

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Originally posted by: beeny

hii buzz...its Baz😳
as alawyzz nice OS with cute swaron moment😳 & romentic pool game 😃
thank u so much for PM

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