SwaRon OS ~A Game Of Pool~ - Page 2

loved it! soo cute! but i could recommend you to space out your writing if u can...its just that its so hard trying to follow it sometimes. lol 😉

Hey Baz - u really leave me speechless most times with ur plot and this one is no different...tumhara narration toh mashallah awsum hota hi hai - aaj mujhe sabse achcha laga jo bhi tumne dialogues diye dono ko...that word playwas cute - I wuld b overwhelmed if we culd witness 10% of this kind of rutna manana of SwaRon on the show - Swayam ka charm aur Sharon's end tak effort to not fall prey to it yet again but unsuccessful were both equally pleasing to the senses ... a feel good OS for me - I don't deny the passion but it was relative and this Swayam in charge of the situation is what we most wanna c on the show & I'm sure even Sharon too deep down in her heart 😉

hii buzz
as alawyzz nice OS with cute swaron moment😳 & romentic pool game 😃
thank u so much for PM

aaawww I found it too cute rather than anything else... Swayam literally trying to seduce her during the game so that she could not concentrate like her clothes used against her... I just loved it Baz awesome work...((:

AWESOME OS...i just love ur creations ...swayam n sharon trying to seduce each other on a game of pool ...interesting ...different & mind blowing...plz keep writing...👏👏👏

Sharon blushing and Swayam teasing... wat a scene... ⭐️

😳AMAZING WORK . . . POOL GAME BECAME HOTTY NAUGHTY GAME . . . . TRULY LOVED IT .😳

Originally posted by: tanukaswaron

BAZ 🤗...Tanuka u always greet me with a hug thank you so much for that🤗

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unres

Another SwaRon os from you and i am the happiest persone here in IF 😃...awww...thanks

Awesome os !!

fantastically written .

This is one of the HAWTest pool game i have ever come across

sharons anger and swayams way to handle it , amazingly described in the os 😃...thank you

i love how u portray swayam in ur writeups , he always takes the charge and knows what to say and what to do , to melt sharons anger and make her blush like beet root ☺️...heheh lolz thank you😳

totally loved it .

thanks for the PM.

keep these wonderful os's coming ...

thank you so so much for such an amazing comment Tanuka i loved it🤗

Originally posted by: Sudha-SK

The most hot pool game one could ever imagine 😳😈

liked the fight as it made the way for a Game of Pool 😆

Swayam leaves Sharon speechless and your OS do that to me..i can't put it in any better words. 😳...Tahnk you so much Sudha now i am speechless as to how thank you😳

awww Sudha thank you so much for the comment it really means alot😃

oh it was amazing fantastic ,well written .